please update soon. the story is very good. And you have all my fav couple p/a & d/p

Aww! Ashram/Pirotess! Not many around! Great job

I loved it!I LOVED IT!Write more!Please please please please please!I am begging you,write have a great talent and the story griped me in a death write You!

This is such an adorable story. The Pirotess and Ashram pairing is one of my favorites. Please, Please right more. I have no complaints.

This is great! I've been waiting for a good Ashram/Pirotess fic. I know Lodoss is frustrating to write because of the lack of reviews, but you can put money that you'll be getting one from me for every chapter. Can't wait to see what you have in store for everyone, how quickly Ashram regains his speech, if Spark brings Ashram and Pirotess together as a family, and who brought Pirotess back to life? I needs to know. Please update soon.

3rd chapter, that was quick! Give us more!

p.s. Your stuff is good, not everybody could spout a fanfic worthy of a Best Seller Award at every try. As for the OOC characters, nobody will JIHAD!(tm) you for it. Your explanation is reasonable: Maybe they lost something in their death experience(s), it could be anything that you as an author want it to be! Just remember that we, as readers, cannot read your mind (that would be more efficient, hehehe). Tell us...

May I be one of the first to express my joy to see another Ashram/Pirotess fanfic! Not bad for a beginning, even if it need a divine intervention for the resurrection of those two characters. I hope you'll write other chapters.

My only critique is that Ashram doesn't seem to be disturb by the reapperance of Pirotess. He commited suicide when she died! Also, is Pirotess aware that she perished at Dragon Moutain? Maybe she was in a dreamless state, or in the dark hell of the Chaos god Falaris (the adversary of Falis in the War of the Gods) as a sort of valkyrie? She was, after all, "one of the greatest dark elf woman"...

Well, I encourage you to continue and I hope that my critique will help you a little...