hey i apsolutly loved tris in this you did a great job of keeping there characters to there personality and it was amazeing i think you should keep it up

i loved it i think you did a great job with the ending and id love to here more about the kids and how there going to work with there new powers

I really enjoyed this story. The characters' voices were spot on, and I especially liked how you portrayed Evvy and Tris; my absolute favorite characte(^_^)v

Lovely story, I had the biggest shit-eating grin on my face that just kept getting bigger as the story progressed.

omg...loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveit

Definently the best written and best plotted story ive read on fanfiction EVER...should definently be published...if you can get Tamora Pierce's permission of course =D

Seriously, godly story, true to the chars, and suprising to the very end...'Tris has a child?!' awesome

This is absolutely brilliant! I laughed so hard in some spots that my cat stared at me like I was insane... not that that's unusual...

Absolutly amazing. The plot was very well developed and might have passed for an actual book. You kept the characters true and stayed consistent with your theme. I'm whole-heartidly impressed.

I really like this!

Part murder mystery, part action/adventure, part romance, all amazing. Seriously, the characters were brilliant, the plot was twisty and action packed, and the best pacing was brilliantly executed. I was on the edge of my seat (figuratively, since I'm laying down) the entire time.

What can i say, apart from WOW! This is honestly one of my favourite stories ive read on here! To be true, i always imagined the sandry/briar thing, and this whole plot and story line was verry good. I liked the touch about all their students becoming melted together in the same way the four were.

once again, wow ;)
e-ellens

wow...i JUST stumbled across your story today and finished it

amazing! great plot, not to mention you kept everyone in character, AND you managed to throw in the romance without making it a corny lovefest.

great story, i loved it =)

OMFG! That was amazing!

This was amazing. I really enjoyed reading it. The two of you are such amazing writers!

i love the ending you need to write a sequel!.. if you write any other stories tell me because i'd love to read them! I love the way you accomplished this story together, you're both so good at writing and you couldn't even tell when you switched off writing! great job and keep writing!

I totaly and completely love this piece of ffanfiction, seriously it is soo good I bet that if Tamora Pierce had wrote it as a sequel to The Citcle Opens Quaret instead of The Will of the Empress (not that I've read that one, I only just found out that it starred the four awesomest mages EVER yesterday, well I guess two days ago) she would be so proud! I repeat--I LOVE this fic... I gotta check out your other stuff before putting you on the Favorite Authors List, although you will be pleased to know that this is The First Tamora Pierce book to go on My Favorite Story list. WICKED AWESOME