Wow, that was incredible! I loved it, you captured the emotion flawlessly and reflected a side of their relationship which isn't often explored. The dialogue was also very much accurate to the characters...so well done!

~x-xMasqueradeAngelx-x

Um...wow... The story was good but totally unexpected. I didn't think anyone would go to that length with these characters... I love Mickey/Minnie. Your writing is really good.

i love mickey and minnie
thanks, for story it. was sexy



ps. happy holidays ^_^

I just want to say thank you for writing this. I'm pretty much a closet case Mickey/Minnie fan, haha, so I definitely appreciated you writing something so bold and beautiful about the pairing. Nevermind all the winces people are giving you for this, because really it deserves more credit. This was very brave of you to do, and I definitely appreciate it. Your writing style is fantastic, by the way.

Overall, excellent work!

(Also, I would've logged in to submit a review, but I was kind of feeling lazy...)

(jaws dropped)...(THUD!)(wakes up five minutes later) I think I lost my innocence...DOES WALT KNOW THIS?!!?

well...that sure was...interesting...heh..^^;
Woah...I'll never look at those two the same way again, but excellent work nonetheless! I just love it when people write fics where what would be shallow cartoon characters show deeper emotion, kinda like what I did with my Homestar Runner fanfiction. Great work, keep writing!

The story was EXCELLENTLY written, my friend, but the pairing was, ah, unusual. My friend says sick. And frightening. And sick again. Nevermind her! Great story!

*blinks*
Oh my!
That was certainly unexpected! I've never read a Micky/Minnie pairing quite like that before.but thats not to say that its bad. In fact, I welcome this kind of fic! What a relief to see someone look at Micky and Minnie as two adults with adult feelings, rather than just the 2-d comedy mice that they are so often depicted as. Its a daring and unusual story, but I think you've managed to maintain a kind of balance which lends it real credibility.
Excellent fic! Well done!

Characterization:

Hmmm, while Mickey and Minnie were definately out of character, and it was rather horrifying reading about their tryst, I think that the change in their personality was a welcomed and much-needed one. 5 out of 10.

Emotion:

The emotions were plotted well, if not slightly childishly on Mickey's part - although, now that I think about it, I wouldn't put crying in front of a girl beneath him. He wears his heart on his sleave. 9 1/2 out of 10, simply beacuse I'm not into the whole "I love you" thing.

Plotting:

The plotting and pace was doen well for this sort of story; no one wants to read a long epic romance about Mickey and Minnie, so the fact that this is a one part, stand alone story works very well. Not too stretched out, but not hurried. 10 out of 10.

Style:

The writing was done well, and words were used accurately. Complete control in the story. 10 out of 10.

OVERALL:

A very interesting, twisted fic. A look on the loveable Disney characters that many people have pondered secretly (myself included) but none have been brave enough to voice. Overall, I give it a 9 out of 10.

-semper_fi-

UM... YEAH... Well, I never though anyone would go to that extent with lovable cartoon mice but, hey, here you are, getting a review with someone who's in love with a plascicene rooster. Good content. You could do really well if you did romance with people.

Wow. This is really well written. Maybe it should be PG-13, though. Just a suggestion. I never thought of Mickey and Minnie having those kinds of feelings. Cool.