This is -stupid-. It's complete **ap. Give this up.

Ralph Dermosa

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This Doesn't make any since at all.

But Still it's a very god story.

What do you mean that nobody reading your stuff. Beside I like the story and hope that you continue and explain how Ryoga got his new curse and how Ranma got Akira as a fiance. Last time I check there were only one chapter to the story this year. In other words write more.

I hope that you going to explain why Ryouga a girl now and what happen to him becuase i'm confuse as hell

A very nice story so far, but I have to agree with everyone (and apparently, you too), in that it's kinda slow, isn't it? I mean, four chapters, and nothing has really happened so far. It took forever just to establish that Ryouga didn't fall into the 'spring of mute girl'.

Still, a very entertaining story, and you stick close the spirit of the original series. Just one thing, though. When making a scene transition, you usually give no warning at all. Show of hands on how many people thought the opening scene with Mary in Ch. 5 was happening this moment.

Wish you'd update more often, but such is life, I suppose. Keep writing, this is better than many a fic out there.

let me just guess... soap is shampoo's mother, right? well, anyway, this is a great story and i'm glad you have continued it.

Good Story!

Such a good story! I can't wait for more. And I agree with Shane, your style is interesting and well developed, I almost forgot there hadn't been any real plot yet. Keep up the great work. Ja!

Good Story!

this is a great story! now we just need a plot.

Lookinfine! You have a great writing style, one that keeps me interested even when there arent any great plot advancements or action related scenes.

Keeping things interesting in comparatively mundane scenes is (to me) what separates the Great Writers from those that are "merely good"!

Not bad, i'll be looking forward to new chapters of this and of your other works.

Ah, this has the makings of a very good romp.

I guess Ryoga's personality has improved some eh?

After all you've given him a considerable upgrade on his curse.

Nice start, well written a pleasure to read. Looking forward to reading the rest of this tale.

By all means please post your past works to ff!

Based on this sample I have no doubt they will be entertaining reading.

Good to know about Shattered and Fairy tails new chapters, but hey, Queen of pigs is so good it makes the wait tolerable!

I don't know what this story's about nor where it's headed, but it certainly has caught my attention. The prose keeps me guessing as to what is going on, which necessarily isn't a good thing, but in this case the technique works great. I await the next chapter with anticipation.