Enjoyed part ii. Great job on your short story. Heading off to read part iii now.

Quite good, really. I'm glad you put up a sequel, as it by no means feels finished and I rather like it. A little tip, if you like reviews: stories tend to get more of them when they are allowed to lengthen-assuming it fits with your storyline. At least, that's my experience. It's been fairly regular for my stories to start out getting 1-5 reviews per chapter and gaining reviewers on at least every second. If you don't care, well, there's nothing wrong with short stories.

hi,good story,bye

great story, i'll review better later, keep writing, i'm late for wooooorrkkk.

I really enjoyed this - and I *loved* your Lily. She was very believable. You handled the complicated and conflicting feelings very well throughout. I could have done with just a little more git!Snape in the beginning and perhaps slightly more tension throughout, but the calm and soothing tone was certainly refreshing and welcome in a sea of angst-for-angst's-sake. Can't wait to see how the sequel develops - thanks!

teehee? I just had to check. *smiles happily* i have mentioned that i love his story haven't i? *nod in acceptance of the Uni thing* I'm in college at the moment so don't worry i at least partally understand

another great couple of chapters...it seems ur updating a lot i mean a LOT faster than i thought...hehehe anyways i'm all caught up and now i'll be eagerly awaiting ur next chapter(s)...anyways plz keep up the good work...although i have a question...r the angels suposed to be harry and severus...or r they just sort of representations of wut there feelings r gonna turn into and which side they r on? anways ttyl bbye

*Ashley*

PS: did i mention to update soon?

I wonder if you even read these reviews... oh well I shall Review anyways.

I like the chapter, as it is rather amusing. I can just imagine how Sev would react thought to finding out that harry and seen and felt everything his mother had on his birthday. In any event I really would like you to continue.

Keep writing! This is getting good. I'm excited!

So did sev have any visions/memories? please, post the next part soon!

*laugh quietly* mwahhahaha! I can just picture Harry going up to Sev and saying "I'm yours because my mother made it so."

Great Story. I'd really like to see the outcome of this. :)

Great story! I love how it starts, with Harry not interested in Sev in any way, but through his mum's diaries starts to see a different man. I thought it was a nice touch having Lily have TWO serious boyfriends, AND they knew about each other, and they didn't fight about it! I love the bond, it's very different. The flashbacks to his mum's memories and feelings is fabulous... poor Harry, its gotta be distracting as hell. And now, the dream of Sev... Oh Boy! I can't wait for the next Chapter, distracted won't be the word for what Harry will be feeling. My question is... did Remus and Sirius know about the "threesome"? I may have missed that being mentioned, or it may not have come up yet. Gotta read this over again. My kid will love this one, too. (She's 18) I love this pairing. Good work!

Okay, this was pretty good. Until I read about the slash. Sorry, time for your story to leave my Favs List.

This story is PHENOMENAL! The more I read of it, the more I WANT to read of it! You've handled the "entries" so wonderfully and I can imagine hearing the words in my head.

I also think that you've nailed the characterizations of Harry & Snape PERFECTLY!

MAJOR KUDOS on a job well done! I anxiously await more. So, what are you waiting for? Quite reading this rave review and get writing! ;-D