 Pureevil230 2006-04-08 . chapter 8aww cute. |
 Shiroi Sakura 2004-12-29 . chapter 8That's it? OH MY GOD! Please tell me that there is more. Please tell me that there is more. You can't just leave it like that. There has to be more. Please tell that there is more to this story. Well, just in case you didn't get it through my ranting... really liked your story and i think that you should write more... i sincirly hope you write more because i really liked it and i hope that there is more. thanks. |
 Sam 2004-06-13 . chapter 8 Aww! What a great ending. Very well written, fast paced and I absolutely loved Shal warning Bren. The dynamics between Shal & Em were great, the growing relationship between Bren & Em was adorable. I'd ask for a sequel but not quite sure where it would go from here so how about another story? |
 bunny angel 2002-12-15 . chapter 8*laughing with joy* is the ending a bit rushed though?? eh?? iono... ^_^ |
 Runaway_Shadow 2002-10-05 . chapter 8 Ohw! Nice ending! |
 Megara 2002-10-05 . chapter 8 Hi Revolution !
I read all your Mutant X Fan Fiction and I really appreciated them !
Thanks for putting Brennan and Emma together !
See you very soon with this time, my stories !
Megara |
 Ambrosia12 2002-10-05 . chapter 8Hey Revolution, great story and nice ending to it all... |
 lunarlanding 2002-10-01 . chapter 6I'm sorry that I didn't find this story sooner. Gorgeous work with the Emma/Brennan storyline. I quite like your style. |
 angeleyes 2002-09-30 . chapter 6 this story keeps getting better and better all the time. i can't wait to read the next part. |
 Runaway Shadow 2002-09-30 . chapter 6 Wow Nice chapter! Trouble, me likes!
I like the lyrics, don't stop! |
 bunny angel 2002-09-29 . chapter 5ackk! what is up with Emma going Hi everytime she wakes up!!!!!! anyway....moremoremoremoremore Brennan and Emma!!!!!! *ponders how revolution will end the story....* |
 Runaway Shadow 2002-09-25 . chapter 5men :) Nice chapter! |
 angeleyes 2002-09-23 . chapter 5 this story keeps getting better and better all the time |
 angeleyes46 2002-09-22 . chapter 1this story is cool. |
 Candy coated 2002-09-22 . chapter 4 Keep writing Its a really good story hope u finish it soon. |