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Pureevil230
2006-04-08
ch 8,
abuseaww cute.
Shiroi Sakura
2004-12-29
ch 8,
abuseThat's it? OH MY GOD! Please tell me that there is more. Please tell me that there is more. You can't just leave it like that. There has to be more. Please tell that there is more to this story. Well, just in case you didn't get it through my ranting... really liked your story and i think that you should write more... i sincirly hope you write more because i really liked it and i hope that there is more. thanks.
Sam
2004-06-13
ch 8, anon.
abuseAww! What a great ending. Very well written, fast paced and I absolutely loved Shal warning Bren. The dynamics between Shal & Em were great, the growing relationship between Bren & Em was adorable. I'd ask for a sequel but not quite sure where it would go from here so how about another story?
bunny angel
2002-12-15
ch 8,
abuse*laughing with joy* is the ending a bit rushed though?? eh?? iono... ^_^
Runaway_Shadow
2002-10-05
ch 8, anon.
abuseOhw! Nice ending!
Megara
2002-10-05
ch 8, anon.
abuseHi Revolution !
I read all your Mutant X Fan Fiction and I really appreciated them !
Thanks for putting Brennan and Emma together !
See you very soon with this time, my stories !
Megara
Ambrosia12
2002-10-05
ch 8,
abuseHey Revolution, great story and nice ending to it all...
lunarlanding
2002-10-01
ch 6,
abuseI'm sorry that I didn't find this story sooner. Gorgeous work with the Emma/Brennan storyline. I quite like your style.
angeleyes
2002-09-30
ch 6, anon.
abusethis story keeps getting better and better all the time. i can't wait to read the next part.
Runaway Shadow
2002-09-30
ch 6, anon.
abuseWow Nice chapter! Trouble, me likes!

I like the lyrics, don't stop!
bunny angel
2002-09-29
ch 5,
abuseackk! what is up with Emma going Hi everytime she wakes up!!!!!! anyway....moremoremoremoremore Brennan and Emma!!!!!! *ponders how revolution will end the story....*
Runaway Shadow
2002-09-25
ch 5,
abusemen :) Nice chapter!
angeleyes
2002-09-23
ch 5, anon.
abusethis story keeps getting better and better all the time
angeleyes46
2002-09-22
ch 1,
abusethis story is cool.
Candy coated
2002-09-22
ch 4, anon.
abuseKeep writing Its a really good story hope u finish it soon.
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