Not the best; your information is way off, and you portrayed the Yuuzhan Vong in an inappropriate manner.

Very well written. Much more better than most of EU trash (especially KJA).Character development of Thrawn (my favourite EU guy) is amazing! Drash is also very impressive (My, I'm getting to like psychotic TIE fighter pilots). I wish I could help Bob get this novel published (It certainly deserves it).

Great writing. I wonder if one of those Royal Guardsmen is the one from the Hand of Thrawn duology. Vergere's dream was an interesting way to present the upcoming conflict, and the fact that Oin is now aboard makes it all the more real since he'll avoid the desvastation, then return to the planet to mourn afterwards.

Very well written. The native population segments offer a great deal of intrigue, and I find myself wondering if the Nesz as a species are force-sensitive. The moral dilema added a realistic touch as well.

Impressive, this is written like a novel, with a high level of vocabulary. The plumbing of Vong cululre is especially researched, with incidence of love for biological weapons, social status/disfigurement and that slight edge of hypocrisy regarding purpose and power.

Someone recommended this story to me and Ive been looking for it. And by gods it is awesome! You have done well to capture the Imperials and the Vong. I congradulate you for your splended work so far. Now on to chapter 4!

Very well-written...quite possibly up there with some of the NJO stuff. I have to admit, I may not finish this-I am so sick of the Vong story, I'm only buying Balance Point because Kathy wrote it and there's some hope for a Jaina story. But this is very good. (And yeah, from your profile-franchise fiction does not buy from unknown authors, ever...)

This a a very good series, and I'll get around to reading the rest soon enough. **At the moment, something is messed up with chapter 5 & 6, so I'll wait until it's fixed or something.** )

Ok, what the heck? There's a MSN ad instead of the story? Somethings funky...

I was just in the middle of this story when it hit me, "Wasn't there a Jedi Vergere in Rogue Planet?" Then it hit me...I was always wondering what hpapened to her and didn't realize it was her in the New Jedi Order books. So, this is a great story, I remember! (it's also good besides my little ordeal. Any hoo...)

That was an intersting look into the Yuuzhan Vong life before they came into the picture(the books...whatever) I really don't like them, but they make great enemys. I couldn't get into the first two chapters of this story for a while, something was screwed up, but I guess it's fixed now.

I'm sorry but I think something must have happened to your first three chapters. There is nothing to read.