Publish? I'd go for that in a heartbeat, but the fine folks at Del Rey and Lucasbooks might not feel the same and (quote from the Matrix) they are guarding all the doors, they are holding all the keys. So I guess this is as close as it's gonna get. Thanks for the vote of support, though.

Anyway, don't give up on the NJO just yet: Luceno's duology was good, Balance point was all right, and they still have J. Gregory Keyes lined up. If anybody can write another "Vision of the Future," it's JGK.

Absolutely wonderful! I agree you should try and get this published.

This is too good. I'm serious buddy this is really good plus, it is a valid story and doesn't disturb the book/movie storyline. Although the NJO books are pissing me off; Luke is 43 and Mara is just a little younger and they still have no children. Seriously I think they should let Zahn write another good book with Luke and Mara (of course) and Skywalker children, then have the Yuuzhan Vong invasion. You should publish this I would love to read it with the rest of Star Wars series. REALLY GOOD!

As in the previous part, this is of high quality. The possibility of a force sensitive yet mentally unstable individual is certainly interesting... We've seen it before in Joruus C'boath, but I prefer this one's attitude.