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Shadow Cat17
2008-04-04
ch 2,
abuseThis is an extremely cute story! Is there more?
Lil'FireKitten
2007-05-30
ch 1,
abuseCUTENESS! I love bunnies!
Aki-Enjeru
2005-01-16
ch 2,
abusegreat story is there going to be another chapter?
KagoKitty
2004-11-06
ch 2, anon.
abuseI know you haven't updated this for awhile...but I just thought I should let you know I enjoyed reading what little of it you have posted! Maybe you'll update it sometime, perhaps? lol
=^-.~^=
Hinoto Nobukaze
2004-10-15
ch 2,
abuseThis was great! I really enjoyed it.

Hinoto
kirara242
2004-09-10
ch 2,
abuseaww... i though that was a good story.
Dr.De-claw
2004-09-10
ch 2, anon.
abuseDammit, you didn't finish the story!
dakota423
2004-08-17
ch 2,
abuse...u spelled mammal wrong... sry, i have a pet peeve. Pleez update! I once had to take care of three baby bunnies and this brings back memories... though sad to say I didn't have a hot monk with me at the time. *depressed sigh*
Angel
2004-08-12
ch 2, anon.
abuseHow cute! Kawaii! I love baby bunnies! I almost think of InuYasha as a jerk for killing the mother. Try adding in more romance between Miroku and Sango. Update!
MormonMaiden
2004-04-30
ch 2,
abuseOH,OH! please go on! i can't wait for more! try maybe adding a little more to the sango/mommy miroku/daddy kind of relationship! ilove it!
FallenStardust
2004-03-26
ch 2,
abuseCute story. The only problem is now I want a bunny!
Rein of Review inc
2004-01-07
ch 2,
abuseRein: Hey...good story, you know? The only problems I found were-
All but Rein: NO! Don't do it!
Firefly: If she goes into detail...
Suaru: I know, Mitsuke, I know...don't panic! If she starts, all we need to do is threaten Konjiro...you know she adores him...
Konjiro: Wait just a da-
Rein: Don't even consider mercy one as of my virtues when dealing with my professional team's language...do I make myself clear?
Konjiro: Sir, yes sir.
Rein: I AM A GIRL! Okay. All you need to worry about is indenting and your spelling...such as 'mammel' is actually spelled 'm-a-m-m-a-l'. Anyway, nice job. Finish.
End review.
Byakuganchick
2003-12-29
ch 2,
abuseAw! How cute! But are you sure it only takes bunnies two or three weeks to fully mature? I mean, I wouldn't really know since we got my rabbits when they were slightly past that age and they're domesticated instead of wild. But I've raised a squirrel from an itty-bitty baby until he could go out on his own and it took him about four months. But then again, squirrels are not rabbits. *nods* Yup, definetely not rabbits.
bloodstainedlace
2003-12-09
ch 2,
abusecatwho! hi!! iv been a fan of ur work for along time, i loved ur sango miroku shrine and iv seen some of ur hikaru no go artwork on other sights! do you have rain on this sight?!?! that one was good too anyways i g2g but ill look at ur other stories o this sight
glenda
yoaifan1
2003-10-16
ch 2,
abusei love your story keep going!
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