:) :) :) :)

i love this story

isnt satoshi and kasumi ash and misty's japanese names? this story really is good never stop writing!

love your stories!

This was a great story that kept me reading. You're a really good writer!

it was awesome i love it i cant really put it in words after reading now i wish that it would be what happens in the seires it makes me sad knowing that it won't but putting that aside you did an awesome job with this and i love it

To tell you that I can visualize the scenes in this story says something. This is an incredible story. I like how you named Paris btw. It's a good story all around so I won't bother you with specifics since I'm sure even you know what was good and what was bad. Fortunately the only bad things I saw were the occasional grammatical errors so no worries.

good story, but paris sticks out like a sore thumb, be more subtle with your romeo juliet references

wow, I just read it... it was amazing! The best aaml fanfic I've read this far! I mean... wow... unbelievable beautiful story! well done!

I read this last night. I found it to be fairly entertaining, amusing, and rather cute. The ending was a little...mature? I don't mean sexually mature. I mean...hm... Ash's words towards the end were were cute, but seemed a little mature for him. Hee.

Good idea for the story, though! Kind of a spin off of Romeo and Juliette, so that's cool! ;)

This is amazing. Years ago I read this story on the pokemon tower. I couldn't remember what it was called or who wrote it, I tried to find it but never could. By some luck I came upon this story and just kind of glanced at the summary and I realized this was it. I was so happy. This is an awesome story with a great plot. It's too bad that you don't write fanfic anymore, you are a great author.

-A

I loved it! It's one of the best stories I've ever read! Keep up the good work.

That was an awesome fic. ;)

It really did look like u put ur sweat and tears into it, with all the emotions and the way u described everything :)

That was a great story, very romantic

I'm just glad that they ended up together, it was great how u mixed to different times to make a good fic like this. :)

Keep up the great work, ur an awesome writer.

Catch ya later! ;)

omg::sniffs:that was the saddest most romantic fic i have ever read!it was awsome and...well uber great!i cried it was soo good.you have my vote.your are now on my top ten favorite authors..i could never write a fic im not that creative but you are!good job and write more please::puppy dog eyes:prweedy pwease!

This the most romantic story ever!

I love it! LOVE it!

I will never forget it.

Ashloverforever!

Awesome. Absaloutly awesome. ;)

Wow! What a great story. It was so original... I read nothing like this before. I really injoyed it... Thanks for making such a wonderful story. Please continue with this writting.

This is the best fanfic I have ever read! I so beautiful. I cried through the whole thing! Better than Romeo and Juliet! Bravo!