This is getting very interesting.

But should previous existences really dictate the actions in current ones?

keewl story, i just love it! your story is great,please update!so long!byebye!

i've read thus far and all i can say is 'wow'. i'd like to know what happens next so keep up the good work and write more asap. :-)

Personally I think it's been beautifully written so far. I like the way you're selecting a scene from Ash and Misty here, and one from Satoshi and Kasumi there, it keeps it interesting. V. original, keep up the good work!

Wooooooow...cool story! Continue! Pleeeeeease?

Pretty good, what's gonna happen next?

:squeals: Kawaii! That is just so cu-ute! I've been doing a lot of squealing this week - I'm getting a copy of the prequal to my fave game ever (Dino Crisis 2), Sailor Gaia, my new pen pal/e-pal/beta reader, is sending the strategy guide to it, my mom's friend Steven's got two Bengal cats (They're descended from wild cats, not the tiger), I'm getting Video Girl Ai, Volume 1, and I've just heard that my worst enemy has the crappiest hairdo EVER! ((Red and spiky - EEEWWWW!) I'm getting my hair done blue intead of red form now on! Why do I give all my news out in reviews... Oh, well, I just like everyone else to hear about it too! :-D

Well Karen, you know already what I think of this chapter, but for the record...

It's mightily hard to follow something like your last tale, but this is all that can asked for in an intro. It's mysterious, but cute at the same time. And it poses so many questions - questions which I'm sure you'll answer perfectly when the time comes!

Dan.

always was a big fan of your stories, even though i've rarely reviewed. Could see that this is going to turn out wonderful like your other stories, so keep updating and i'll keep reading. :) cheers!

Oooo, wow. The opening is adorable; it's nice to see that they haven't changed much over the years! LOL! I really like the description in the dream sequences... your sentences flow so wonderfully. Must be that literature training. _ And goody! A reason to look forward to Mondays! I'm interested to see how this story ends up-and if you ever need another beta, lemme know, eh? _

Wow! This looks to be the beginning of a great story. You've definately laid the ground work for it. Can't wait for more. : )

This will be a unique perspective as far as I've read of AAMR's so far. There's just one note, I believe that it's the 'subconscious' rather than unconscious mind that you're refering to.

Keep it up this is shaping up to be a great fic.