Hi! I just picked up this story while browsing around ff and I was amazed by the fact you pointed that Zel hates Rezo because he was "used" as a sample in an experiment in order to regain the sight (it’s all explained in Evolution-R). the amazing thing is that you understood this almost 7 years ago! I can say you've got good eyes! anyway, poor Zel, you had almost make him go through an autopsy! how scary! but it's really a good story, so thank you for post it! see you soon, bye _

Elise-chan

OK, this is my review:

It's really fun watching how different people portray Amelia, like once I read a fiction about her HATING storms, and it's ironic that you make her like them. Personally I love standing out in the rain, it calms me and for some reason I just love being drenched through. It drains my negative thoughts away. So I like what you did here, and you know, you're one of the first fiction that I've read today that actually MEANS AmeliaxZelgadis. Usually people say AZ but they just have them in a conversation. But there's actually something going on here, and I like how you started your fiction in the middle of the story and then back-tracked. It's a good technique, I could never pull it off because it takes a good writer to start in the middle and then get all the way back.

And your Amelia isn't completely outrageous with her feelings, she's not in-human with her justice antics. And quite frankly many people have over-dosed her with that, I mean she doesn't think about it 24-7. I can tell that you have a good sense of judgement with people, no one that I've read (I'm a total Amelia and Zelgadis fan and have probably read over half of their fanfictions) has ever commented on Zelgadis becoming worse in his humanity. But I think, now, that it's a good point, you've inspired me in that department, I need to see how others portray my favourite charcaters to I can see how I want to do them.

Good Job!

Ah! This is so great! The perfect Ending... *sigh* Too bad it's over. *sniffle*

I'll be fine. Anyway, a great story. Hope you write more soon.

Until then...

Ja Ne.

RRune

GREAT FIC! You managed to get z&a together without falling in any of the usual clichés.

I loved the zel-gourry dialogue _

Is this the end of the fic or are you going to continue?

How DARE you end it there! Get off your butt and type the next chapter NOW!

-er...Pretty Please.

I just LOVE their interaction and what Gourry said was soo sweet. Please update another soon.

YAY! Zelly's gonna realize his true feelings...Finally!

RRune

Oh yeah! I love this story and i was eally missing it! an update! woo hoo! More more!

Gourry's logic on love seems very logical! - I mean there isn't really another way to say it, is there? Well I like I like. Lina just loves to pry, doesn't she. Atleast she could have waited until Zel was a little better. Oh well, this IS Lina we are talking about here. Well PLEASE write more SOON! Ja ne

minimerc

This is a great story! Heehee, naked Zelgadis! _! Please update!

Hey, this is really cute! When can we expect another chapter? I hope that soon. The only thing that bothered me a little was the ease that Zel confessed his depression. I mean, he's the closed type, and he probably hates to let other people see his weaknesses, but he talked to her so easily... I was thinking maybe you should add a sort of argument before that or Amelia pressing him to tell her or something. But I really like this! It's so sweet and heroic! Write more soon!

Interesting story ye have here. Most impressive. I don't have the energy to write out a gigantic review, so I'l leave it at well done. _

Yay! Happy ending! ...To that chapter anyway. *grins* Can't wait to see what you'll have for the finale!

*cheers* This is a wonderful fic! Charming, witty, and just the right ammount of WAFF! Bravo! I'm looking forward to seeing this continued!

*adds to favorites*

I had forgotten about this story after the second chapter but now I've found it again and am enjoying it as much as I did before!

I like it when the chapters are written with wit and humor! There's no need to get TOO serious. Still, you write very well so I won't doubt that serious or not, continuing chapters will be a delight. _

YAY! Zel's alive and with no clothes on. ! Good Chappie. ja ne

minimerc

I love this chapter. Soooo Kawaii. OMG, words cannot express how I felt when reading this.

Woohoo! Zelly nude 0_o *laughs* but it's gonna be ending soon *sniffle* Oh well! Like they always say: "All good things must come to an end!" Unless, ofcourse, there's a sequel. *teehee*

This is great! I loved the way you fixed things, and the line about cracks about angels being cliche was just too cute!