WHOA. this is a colossal fic. i'm in awe of your stamina as well as your imagination and skill. .

it's a bit much to wrap my mind around in just one sitting, but rest assured i'll be bookmarking this for future rereading. .

in a more, er, strictly fandom-related sense, i especially enjoyed how much power you gave Megumi in this fic. i think she rocks. .

thanks for a great character (really, the embodiment of a lot of my Goddess imaginations!) and a universe that has really quite blown my mind. .

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Wow. I'm glad that I read this; I've been meaning to for some time now. It's really stunning; you write so professionally, but there's a lot more that's been put into this than just words.

I was actually reading this while listening to Beethoven's ninth, lol. Had me thinking that your fic would make a good opera. :P

Computer problems have kept me from reviewing this story as you wrote it, but I've enjoyed every minute. I usually skip stories that start out like this, or that feature original characters (because, as a general rule, fanficcers are new writers and just not very good at making characters up-Mary Sues, anyone? I make no claim to any talent in that area, myself. :) ). However, this story has been well done. Hikari was rarely overbearing; she was at times, insanely cute. I would have like to see Kenshin remain with her, honestly (NOT a Kaoru fan here!). Otherwise, a great story, and I look forward to more from you!

Clarus

The story is written awesome. I think you also described Battousai very well, I never really liked the multiple personality approach.

You could have somehow used Aoshi's words in Kenshins fight (Spoken on the beach of Enishi's island) : "Because it is MY blade, it is no match for ME" :)

Whoa the first chapter is longer than many stories. I'm really looking forward to reading the next one. Kaoru is OOC but I think that is necessary for plot.

I hope you aren't sorry for the lack of reviews (mine is the third I think) but I think this has 2 reasons. First you update to quick (don't let me stop you :)), and second the Summary is a bit strange.

I think you should write about a Kami (or the Incernation of Justice) coming for Kenshin or something like that, might attract more readers.

P.S. How long have you been writing on this fic? I think 40.000 words are impossible to write in three days :)

In one word: EXCELLENT! I hope people appreciate it as the true jewel it is. I will now recommend your story to some of my friends. Pretty imaginative and wonderfully thought, I love the Kenshin/Justice pairing,it would suit him very weel to become Mercy.I will looking forward the updates.

Oh my god... that was the best story I have read on ... I loved the imagery and the plot line... beautiful... I like how you just focused on Kenshin and Hikari, and not Kaoru... I usually don't like stories where there is an introduced character, but this was great... :D