Nice characterization. You've managed to keep both guys themselves while managing to get them just a tiny bit closer, despite the differences in origins, philosophy and basic goals in life.

You could easily see this as an episode, and the interaction between Harper and Tyr was spot on. Good job.

Smiles. Very nicely done. I really thought Harper was going to be sucked out of the ship which really would have stunk because Harper is all in all my fave character. At any rate, very nicely done, loved the suspense. Keep up the great work. ^_^

*standing ovation!* Wonderful story :D I love how you described Earth. Great Harper and Tyr interaction. I love stories where Harper is the hero! Thanks :D

Very nice... I liked it... keep up the god writing.

good fic!

That was great.

I really liked it, it was interesting and extremely well written. You could easily continue this story as well... hint hint... anyway, good work.