'No walls came in to comfort me, to tell me that I was in an enclosed space, not alone. The fact that anyone could just sneak up on me and that I had no where to put my back to… that frightened me senseless. Why couldn’t I have a normal fear? Like heights or drowning or something? Why?'

Same 'fear' here. Always need a wall to my back and at least two clear, easily accessible escape routes. Nothing wrong with a little healthy paranoia, though, in my opinion.

Heyo! This is an awesome story! I think this has been frozen till the next age, right? o well. Please finish, this is an excellent story.

Um... U shoulda not killed maggur...

yay! the fic nearly got plot cancer, but it was caught early and didn't do anything! yay!

nothing magic...

oh, the creepyness. the unbearable creepyness. if that little muse messes up this fic, i'm going to strangle it myself!

Okay, okay, I admit it. This isn't a real review to Cliché. I just wanted to tell you that I agree with you about your 'Makes Me Mad' number 4. I have petrats myself and I can't imagine life without them.

Woah! Major Matrix flash backs! Haha! I like the turn of events. Oha nd the little author's notes are just adorable:)

Neat i htought it was good ;). This is from the person who wrote Wild child. Thanks for the reviews and the thing about the breaks i'll try that next time. Good job by the way!

This muse of yours better be good. All I can say is "sing in me, oh muse..."

Gah. Too much Greek mythology. Someone shoot me.

Anyway, great chapter. It strayed away from the humor and towards the more serious aspect of the story. And it didn't kill it at all.

.... But that's not the point.

Anyway, gotta jet. Bye hun.

Love,
Stacey

P.S. Did I just say "gotta jet"? .... *shudders*

WHAT?! that was entirely, completely, utterly, err...totally...*can't think of any more synonymous words* unexpected.
mithros: *in darth vader voice* Luk...Keita, i am your father.
*shakes fist* update soon! soon, soon, soon, sooooon!!! (it's been such a long time since you posted anything)
~krizsta

I love self insertion fics. Update soon!

Hahaha!!! THAT WAS JUST AMUSING! Short, to be true, but sometimes short works. Especially on cliff hangers like this. So.... yeah. WHAT HAPPENED TO OWEN THOUGH?? Gah. Right. Anyway, update soon. You said you were working on the next chapter, so WORK ON IT! MUAH!

Love,
Stacey

Keita Windwoods, Shang Serpent, Assasin Extraordinaire, Doer of All Things Dishonourable, Keeper of Snakes, Lady Poisoner, and Informat For All Reasons *deep breath* you MUST upload or update or whatever RIGHT NOW or else you will...you will...you...aw, just right the next chapter already!

why do all the best stories take forever to update?
oh well, just hurry up next time