As with everything, I like.

Wow! I loved that! Everything flowed so well. Please keep writing.

Another great, sweet story. I enjoyed the way you write Owen particularly. Great job!

awwwwwww it made me smile :0 that was really sweet you got the characters really well

A beautiful story, and a great look at Owen, Shmi and Cliegg Lars. Details like the relationship between Watto and Shmi, not so black and white as it appears to Owen, are especially appreciated.