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Reviews for: And the Clouds Began to Lift
starryeyes10 4/15/08 . chapter 1
great story
Anna 10/24/00 . chapter 1
I like the interaction between the two characters. "Average" vs Normal-LOL! Good job.
wickedelphie21 10/23/00 . chapter 1
he he, Average...clever! keep writing, they're awesome!
K.D 10/23/00 . chapter 1
Good plot line! Now the real test is to link it it without sounding rushed. Nice word-spin on the joke about "Average", you've been paying attention to the show.
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