*excited clapping* One of THE best Sparhawk fics I've read and well writen. One thing tho'- maybe a lil bit more description to balance out the speach but not a lot. Really good! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :)

Very interested in seeing this continued. So. Anakha has a sister, who is adept at seeing everything.

S.

interesting...dont wait too long to update!

Well... interesting, to be sure... as good as the real thing? Not a chance. However, one does wonder where thou art going with this... ah, well, I'll find out. I applaud you for trying, though... I never would've got up the guts. ;-D

Touching. But like you said.slightly out of character. But unlike you seem to believe, that's a good thing.It's YOUR fic, not David Edding's. Nice fic. Keep writing. I'm going to add you to my favorite authors.you are a great writer. ^^

This is rather nice actually..
Though I can feel some slight Mary Sue'ness coming from it.. I can't be sure though..

It's a very nice fic nevertheless.. Continue? Please?

o0o0o0o0o0 9il ike tghis one! im hyper

I like this one - the new character is interesting, can't wait for Chapter 4.

NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR SPOLIER!!!!

ARGH!!!!!

hehehe sorry, cept i havent read the hidden city yet, cos i was saving it till later and NOW I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!! boo hoo!!!

waaah!!!

oh, sorry, that was pretty good, actually, i really really liked it...

*squee* Ooh! Changer of Destiny... makes tons of sense now! But... Kurik...

Rather strange to you me saying this, I know, but Sparhawk "gasped"? He doesn't seem like a gaspy sort of man.

~Lia
ps. totally mundane - but with Katara being (most probably) rather slender, and Aslade a rather large woman - how would she fit one of Aslade's dresses?

Yay! Finally, someone brings out Bevier (I always totally adored him). Great start! But it'd be great to give the mysterious lady a name - plus Bevier doesn't blush... /quite/ that much. Though it's pretty cute. Does Danae not like the lady or something? She seems a bit pouty. Sparhawk probably wouldn't say "Lady" (he's more a soldiery sort of a man). Maybe "Neighbour", though probably not "Little sister" (think Naween!) as that'd probably imply the lady was a ... ahem.. *cough* *g*

Apologies in advance if I've offended in any way, and do feel free to 'mail me and tell me how offensive I am. :) My first review, ya know.

This looks really interesting. Update soon, this is really cool. Bevier was always my favourite, and I'm so glad that you've resurrected Kurik - I love his perspective on things.

YAY! BEVIER RULES! HAHA! I'm definetly goingn to check up on this story a lot! *laughs like a maniac* Go Amber Dream! Hurrah! *waves a flag*