Your story was translated in Italian, and now the url is changed - this is the new url
http://w.fanfictions.it/fanfic/tornandoacasa.htm

That ws the last straw for me, I''ve had atrying past week, and this story made me loose it. I can hardly see to type, and I can't find the damn kleenex's...

Don’t wonder about me giving ever single story of yours a review in the next days, that’s only stupid me fleeing the terror of my law-books ;) No honestly, over the last two weeks I’ve read the whole lot of the stories and, well, became an addict. You’ve managed such a neat characterization of Severus Snape that I’m still swimming in tears of admiration (I’m pathetic, am I not?). And besides, I love Snape-redemption-stories. Your stories deserve reviews, especially your short-fics. You’ve done a good job with explaining the sky changing with the weather. It fits with the whole ‘feeling’ of the story, Snape’s fighting against himself, questioning his behaviour and his thoughts. And you don’t forget a tidbit of humor. Loved the lines in front of the gargoyle! Poor Snape, expecting the worst, offering his wand and then Dumbledore, offering him a second chance and comfort. Although there are lots of Snape-Turning-stories out there, this is one of the plausible ones. Why? First, your Snape isn’t at all the typical Saint Snape. Well, maybe a little bit, but in a believing sort of Saintness. Sounds chaotic, I know I know. Anyways, wonderful story, well-written, I have nothing to complain about. Except the shortness. Otherwise, that’s one of the strong points of the story: You don’t lengthen it with unnecassary explanations etc. Nice one!

This makes sense! I like it much better than the usual romance inspired nonesense.

Ah yes, Snape redemtion stories. I just love them. This was very well done!

Oh, a heartbreaking Sev fic. I'm loving you, I really am!

Well written and extremely thoughtfully done. Your Dumbledore brings up a good point; Snape didn't go to him to get his wand broken. For someone who isn't a native speaker you write better than some who are. I'm sure your work will only improve, and it seems to have done from your newest story.

I loved it! It was intriguing and very touching!

Please, Please, write more of the same!

Papilio, :-)

Wonderful. I was recommended your writings by Wylderaven. I'm glad I came. This was very good.

Oh that's so lovely!!!!

I like this plot very much. I've wondered for such a long time how it could have happend Snape coming back to Hogwarts. I like your way expressing it!!!!!

Calvin

Very nice...very plausible. Don't worry about your command of English. It's excellent. Your stories are well worth reading!

aw, that was very sweet
Maybe you could do a sequel or something. 'cause i'm curious to found out what happens next. There are so many directions in which this story could go.:)

Excellent...you captured this very well!! Great job. :)

Wow! I can't believe you aren't a native to English!
Both of these peices are simply wonderful. I love this scene. Deeply amazing and moving. I love seeing how others see Sev's return to the light, and this was absolutely one of the best.
Thank you.

I'm going to review both of your posts in one fell swoop, else I'll begin to sound repetitive. You have grasped the English language in the most beautiful and expressive way. I'd beg you to write more, but I've heard that gets obnoxious. ;) If you still need a beta writer I'm available Mon-Friday 8-4:30 EST.

If I weren't at work, I'd go more in depth with this review, but I've got to at least PRETEND I'm working else they won't pay me.

Just know that I loved every second of your writing.