I'm going to review both of your posts in one fell swoop, else I'll begin to sound repetitive. You have grasped the English language in the most beautiful and expressive way. I'd beg you to write more, but I've heard that gets obnoxious. ;) If you still need a beta writer I'm available Mon-Friday 8-4:30 EST.

If I weren't at work, I'd go more in depth with this review, but I've got to at least PRETEND I'm working else they won't pay me.

Just know that I loved every second of your writing.

That's cool. Good story. I like your writing style.. :)

Lovely!

Wow! I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this, because it is a totally awesome Snape and Dumbledore fic! I really enjoyed reading it.

I read every "Snape turns back to the light" fic I can get my hands on, and every one is different - yours is interesting. I like all-knowing Dumbledore, especially when he can read Snape's mind.

For someone who has not written in English for five years, this story is very well written. Just one thing...how did you get your quotation marks upside down and back to front like that?