This is great! Awesome story!

I honestly loved this. I love how you captured both characters, and gave Jun an actual personality as a real-live girl with slightly stalkerish tendencies rather than a completely over-the-top obsessed fangirl like most people do. Really cute. )

( You can do the honors this time, Dragonclaw. )

Right.

Another good story - I dissaprove of Yaoi, but, then again, I'm not about to pull a good story to pieces over something that trivial.

What I DID like - Honesty. Usually, in this sort of story, gaydude tries to dodge the question. It surprised me when he actually came clean.

( Elaine wasn't exactly very honest to Sarah, Dragonclaw. )

But Elaine never told her she was about to be pushed off a cliff, so it doesn't count. And it was for a good cause.

Typo rate: Near nil. And, very good character/emotion portrayal yet again. Impressed!

( I'm having trouble finding that leopard... )

What? The one in the lavatory with the highway bypass plans?

( And the Vogons' parallel hyperspace bypass. )

Ah.

( I wonder: Earth isn't a stationary planet. It orbits, and keeps changing position relative to the Galaxy. Why would it have to be destroyed, to build something? )

We're dealing with an English author here, Girgash.

( Right. That explains it. )

I'll be frank- I've never been a big fan of Taito or other yaoi/yuri couplings, but somehow I enjoy the way you write your stories about them- maybe because you simply write what you want to write without worrying about what others think. You certainly aren't shy about couples some people would consider odd.

wow. this was good. most jun/matt/tai fics i read end up with jun totally being fine with their relationship. this was sadly refreshing.

it's good... and the first jun/yama/taichi fic i've read.

Yay! For any Jun fic, there's a fine line between canon characterization and The Holy Taito Theory, and *joins confetti throwing* flying colors! Jun was sympathetic and true to form, and that earns a cookie in anyone's books.

aw wow, i normally don't like jun...but she was so nice in this...aww poor her!

but..she'll get someone else! and yama and chi-chan can be together.

you rock! i love this!

;-; the was so sad and beautiful... I loved it!

*Huggles Jun* Such a GOOD character! I love her!

i absolutely love this story and i'm one of those emotional ones so i started to cry and now i can't stop listening to that song

This's one of the best digimon story's I ever read! Although it contains Taito! [And I hate Taito...] Jun and Matt TALK! Serious! Aww... fantastic! I love Jun - she's a great caracter, isn't she? BTW: I liked this story that much... that I translated it [into German] - I hope, you don't mind. ;)

Yeah! *throws confetti* I love this story! You made Jun seem like such a nice person (which is a change from other stories where she is a evil ) and that's great. . I like Jun! She's cool... "I'm leaving because I love you..." *sob* so sad..And it's also nice there's no angst and sucidal thoughts..

Write the next 's a good fic.

wow..that was a really great story...so sweet and angsty too, my favourite. Write more!