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| Dr. Lancet 2004-03-19 ch 7,  | abuseWas this re-Posted or something? I could swear that I've Reviewed this before... Regardless, it's El Magnificento. As Usual. (PS. Update "Storming Skies!") |
| The OgeeBoogie Man 2003-09-06 ch 7, | abuseExcellent ending to this story. I'd give it a 10 out of 10 for its length... |
| Sarumarine 2003-03-29 ch 7, | abuseHoly frick! This is a great story. I don't think I even have anything to mention for you to fix. There wasn't really anything I could make out that was a terrible mistake. Man, you should keep writing. Good job. |
| !!! 2003-02-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseHey RustyD, This is pretty good. In case you didn't notice, I fixed A Full Story, which will be After Sturm's Fall once they update the page. |
| The OgeeBoogie Man 2003-01-18 ch 5, | abuseThings are heating up, I see. Very good battle description. I wonder why good pieces of fiction like this do not get many reviews. |
| The OgeeBoogie Man 2002-12-04 ch 3, | abuseThis is probably the best fanfiction peice in the Advance Wars section, but I do not have time to read it all just now. I cannot believe it is getting as little feedback as it is. I noticed most of your references, like stereotyping Drake's accent and mentioning the 'Watrix'. All clever, and they tie well into the immersive storyline. |
| THE Elvenking 2002-10-05 ch 7, | abuseNice... |
| Ulyaoth 2002-09-25 ch 7, | abuseDizam. This story reminds me alot of Michael O' Hare's Command and Conquer stories that appeared early in the site. Same emphasis on a unit, and giving it a more human face than "The thing you click on and make stuff blow up." His stories made me interested in fanfic writing, evidenced that my first (and only story, currently) is based on the enemies from Eternal Darkness. This is a pretty good story in its own right, with nice descripitions and battle sequences, decent characterization, and a well-executed plot. Although, I do have to wonder why Glenn didn't just steal some clothes from a clothing store or something when he entered the city. Better me a thief than get turned into Swiss Cheese. And I have to admit the Catch-22 reference to a "Yossarian" as one of the pilots made me chuckle. Anyway, good work. -Ulyaoth Ancient of Magick and Ninja |