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| Willow0085 2002-09-27 ch 1, | abuseRobin, I really liked this companion piece of sorts. I've got a soft spot now for Will, and I think you did a great job of capturing him. |
| Fanatic482 2002-09-20 ch 1, | abuseoooo... Francie suspicion... now what was that girl doing with a heavy coat? don't tell me you're leading us to believe there's more to meets the eye with Fran... *covers eyes and ears* don't wanna hear it. although... it does serve to effectively prove that even after all that's happened with Syd, Will's still not as observant as he SHOULD be... oh. and //No one is going to hurt your kid sister. Not even a man she thinks she might love.// loved that. now, i'm starting to wish i had an older bro instead of a younger one. hee. beautiful as always though. although i don't think anything can ever compare to that masterpiece "house of lies" :-) |
| Geogirl 2002-09-20 ch 1, | abuseOOOO! The layers, the intrigue. Great job picking up from Waterdancer's excellent start. Would love to see more. Can't wait to see where this goes. |
| laras-dice 2002-09-19 ch 1, | abuseOooh. So wonderfully devious. All these characters and their layers of lies. I really loved seeing all those interactions, knowing from Blood Ties that there was more to the story than we were getting, and you did a great job with that. More? Please? -Lara |
| Thorne 2002-09-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, Robin, I love it. My favorite part is still when they are all standing around lying to each other, and none of them know it. I want the next one in the series now! |
| Couch 2002-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This is awesome. I need to go back and reread Blood Ties, because I don't really remember which one it was, but I am guessing it was the one where Francie is Anna's sister? Because of Francie's "bruise" and heavy coat, etc....anyway, I will go read that now, but you are so good! I can't wait to read more of your writing! |
| Jenai 2002-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! This is amazing work, Robin. I really enjoyed reading this, and I can't wait to see what happens with this universe. I know that its my turn. ;) |
| Celli 2002-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI like this--and yes, the additional conflict is good! That last paragraph still gives me chills. Yeek. |
| coolbeans 2002-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI ALWAYS love your writing! this is so good. I think Francie has a secret too! (that was pretty obvious, but im gonna keep thinking im cool anyway) please update sooN! |
| Rach 2002-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know I love this. Your Will is so dead-on that it's a bit unnerving. :) What a great idea, to do a companion piece to the awesome "Blood Ties" -- love 'em both! |
| Karen T 2002-09-19 ch 1, | abuseAww, can I give the Will in this fic a hug? Please? :) Robin, *beautiful* job! The interactions between Will and Amy on the phone was touching and spot-on for how 2 siblings interact, and I really liked the ominous undertones that were present throughout the Will/Syd/Francie conversation. It was nice to see Will struggling to make sense of his life and finding respite within Francie, unaware of who and what she's become. I am *definitely* loving this tag-team effort between you and Jenai. More please... :) |