Ah. That was definitely very refreshing to read. You had me laughing, crying, exploding, and guiding along with the moment. Complete disbelief wasn't a rare occurance while reading this brilliant piece of fic. The story was so well thought out and fit so perfectly together and just fell into bliss at the end.

The characters are as loveable as ever, and though some fangirls weren't happy with Eriol's behavior, they really need to get out and look at him a bit more. He's more than just sly on his part. You captured him wonderfully and more mysterious than ever. Forget what those fangirls said, he was my favorite in this story and I loved what he was doing.

Now, I found myself relating to this story a lot. I was very perked when I realized how my personality is somewhat similar to Tomoyo's. [[I usually hate it when people say that they can relate to a character, but I need to mention it in this review]] I don't tend to enjoy pestering others with my problems, even if they're bigger than life in other's eyes. She's got it all, yet she questions her happiness, which I do sometimes. I don't necessarily have everything, but more than most people. She was kind of unsure of herself, though, as Eriol pushed her into sex, even if she wanted it or not. Had she been a bit stronger, she would have been able to push him away. But, that's what the story was about, really. Making her stand up for herself and making her stronger than before.

The dialogue. ;_; Beautiful. If I can have people's brains like yours for a day, I'd really like to know exactly how it functions. I've actually been thinking about memorable quotes and good dialogue that make a story strong for the past week. Like, unforgettable quotes. How do people think of those ingenious combination of words? I just wish I was able to.

The story and twists were amazing. That's what makes a good story, a turn of evets you never see coming. I knew there was something fishy about Kagami Daidouji, but the feeling slipped away and I actually started to like him. He seemed sweet, but that feeling never really went away. When I read he was working for the Japanese Mafia, it was just such a surprise to me. Good for Sonomi for getting rid of that piece of garbage!

The timeline was a little confusing at the beginning, but I caught on and went with the flow. You had a unique way of bringing about this story in the order that it's in, and I liked it.

I have an uplifted feeling of satisfaction in me. It's one of those moments were I can say I can die happy. I haven't smiled so big in a while or cheered on a story like this in a long time. You had me hooked since the prologue. I wasn't able to read the rest of the story because I was reading it on my crappy cell phone, but now that I have, I'll definitely suggest this to others to read. Thanks for writing this and I hope I made a little sense in this review.

Basically, I really, really, really like it. xD

I like your take on Tomoyo and how your probably one the few (if not only) people who actually portrayed a side of her in a logical way. :) I wish that it was longer though, because out of reading more of your fanfics, they're really sweet yet too short (it seems like you don't really write more than twenty chapters on average).

Also, I'm wondering about your kind of oneshot Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfic, the one called Coffee Girl. I really, really loved that one and I was hoping that you'd write something like that or close to it with Seto and Shizuka as the main pairing/characters, since there aren't that many good pairings out there for them among the usual yaoi (it's practically everywhere nowadays, actually) and Seto/Anzu fanfics.

hm...they're having sex in every chapter...can u possibly come up with something..idk, more original?

also, u should probably give Hamlet the credit of "Methinks lady doth protest too much" or something. you definitely did not come up with that urself

LMFAO, now that I think about it, without one parent everyone is portrayed as screwed up. Wonderfully written. I really liked this, and I totally agree, the goody two shoes thing was very irksome. I loved the interaction with Tomoyo and Li. Very well done.
Elodie~

lol. that was hilarious the ending. Li's reaction when he discovered it was Eriol the whole time was hilrious. you are a great writer.

that as so cruel of her fother! i can't believe a father would do that to his own child! he is really a ** son of a **! (ahem, anyways...)

lovely writng, i couldn't help rereading some parts. and i'd like to say the last few paragraphs of this chapter are absolutely gorgeous.
yay for eriol x tomoyo!

wow. a bar? how daring. there was one part during the events of the bar there was a certain phrase that said,
"that school skirt is driving them wild." Eli whispered in her ear.

notice you used the name "Eli" when i THINK it's supposed to be Eriol. I THINK! I'm not sure if it was really eriol who said it or some bartender named Eli. if that's so, then ignore my comment.

i think that's very sweet of how she waited for him. he probebly won't come though since Li is there. i really love your style of writng! the story is going great so far. tomoyo seems slightly less polite as she usually does in the anime, but she IS gonna be 17. no, just ignore me. i love your story.

oh wow. i really love the way you write. my heart was litarally poundding when i read the part between tomoyo and eriol. talk about confidence. btw, i'm gonna submit a review for every chapter i read, so don't look at melike some freak when i end up sending you 5 reviews in one go.

wow! how naughty of eriol! i would neve have expected. this is delicious. you are a great lemon writer. they make such a cute couple!

OMG! This was absolutely amazing! It was incredible! I love it to death! You did a marvelous job at writing this. Congratulations!

Yay she finally had her moment to shine!! Nice story I know I didnt reveiw the other chapters! I'm sorr I know I should but when you get caught up and the story is already finished your ever more tempted to press the next button :) !! Great story it was a side of Tomoyo that I'd hadnt read before or at least not at that age! Great chapter and great Fic!

White Blossoms

great job =P tomoyo x Eriol Rocks¡¡

Wow. I'm shocked. The whole story was completely unexpected. Nice job on the story. Still... I wonder if you're going to ever write again. If you do, I'll be really looking forward to it.

~Lunaresce

Hello...
I really love your work...
I love the tomoyo-eriol tandem so much...
In fact, Behind the Camera is my favorite tomoyo-eriol fanfic...
I hope you'd write more tomoyo-eriol fanfics...
please...
i'm going to write one soon...
can you read and review my fic too?
thanks a lot...