... woah...the sun exsploaded... didnt see that comming... that stinks...anyways COOL STORIE, you could throw a twist in there thaat someone survies that and make another one! or not what ever you want, ur the author!

fuck ass

This story was great. It's so

uh its really really good but u should put it into chapters instead of saying chapter 1 chapter 2 u know what i mean

Great story, but the ending could have been better.

realy good but why is it rated pg-13 theres no swears some violence and nothing else

Please write a sequel! I should have read this long time ago!:)

I knew I wasn't just the only one who played EV on the mac! I never noitced here! Must be really hard to write a good story like this because the game's so flexible (stupid Captain Hector, always blowing my ship up!) Anyway, great story! Keep up the good work!

Dude, you TOTALLY 0wnzed that story! But seriously, do something EV:O; I'd love to see some Voinian asses whooped...

Can't wait for the next one!

You've gotta make a sequel to this! Like what happens after the Sol system is destroyed. I wish Ambrosia put the sun in the game. Anyways, great story!