enjoyed the story!

So we leave Snape just sitting there in pain. No relief? Not much of an ending. That sounded harsh. I really enjoyed the story, it was great. Maybe a more definite ending would have been better though. Maybe him throwing himself off a bridge or something. We know he doesn't - well JKR never said so - but it would have been interesting (:

...*stares at the screen, open mouthed*...b-b-b-but...*cries*...no!!!!! not over!! not over!!!
*wails*
#Arien#

Believe me, I'd be having a fit of self-pride and hysterical excitement if i wrote a fic as good as this!!
*scrunches face up* only one more chapter...*Sobs*
Btw, i reccomend Lord of The Rings!! it's really worth it, you're a big fan of HP (correct me if im wrong?? ;) lol) so it's very likely you'll love it ^_^
#Arien#

Well it's sure been an interesting ride. I knew there had to be a reason that James and Lily decided to change secretkeepers. I like how you handled that bit. Stupid rat Peter! I'll be looking for updates...how long till the last chapter?? ): I read your blog and you said you'd already finished it! When are you going to put it up? Suspense killing me and all that.

Thanks
CC

yessum, i prefer to be called Arien. *blushes* Goddess?? nooo, i dont deserve that!! you do!! *grins* Goddess Tyde!! but..*lip quivers* only two more chapters? b-but...but...

yay!

*looks around the review-page insanely* why the HELL haven't you got a hundred reviews?! this is one of those mega-successful stories that should be famous throughout the HP section of fanfic.net! Everyone, go tell all your fellow fanfic authors and HP fans!!!
Please carry on ^________^
#Arien#

**is catching up on the chapters she's missed**
I'm gonna be a publisher when I'm older!! I'll publish your schtuff!!! an' I'll publish a book full of my fave Snapey fics, and your'sll be the first in the book!!! **nodds**
Onto the next chapter ^________^
#Arien#

*grins* Seems to me all the best stories have Severus in them.(including this one^_^)

Keep writing!

Continue please.

Hope you had fun on your vacation. Where did you go?

Good to see another chapter. It's a bit short but I like how Snape is getting more obsessional than actually in love with Lily. Is he going to do something drastic?

Okay, since I already reviewed Chap 17 and I didn't put everything I wanted to say, I had to put in another review. ^_^ Of course, if you're like me, you don't mind a bit, right?

Anyway, I jsut really wanted to say that you are sucha great writer! The chapters are SOOOOO well done, and I mean that. Everything is so perfect.

Publish books for a living. I'd buy 'em. And, yes, feel free to make me a beneficiary in your will if you make a couple million...

XD

~ Kelly

Yay! *claps hands like an idiot*

This story continues to become better and better!

Keep it up! It really is a quality piece of work.

Hi I like your mentions of sexy,naked,cranky Snape. I sure wouln't mind if you kept mentioning it. yay