...Wow.
I'm quite certain that was my favorite of any songs I've seen scripted by an amateur. Superb flow and rythm, fitting and powerful imagery, and appropriately simple and depressed language. Your use of harkening to subtle themes in the story have not gone unnoticed either.
Very well done. I thank you for granting my request and apologise that I did not take notice sooner.

reviewed by Zodiac: these lyrics are brilliant, really professional fit in with the music i can't help but sing them. could you do one for Garnet's theme? though i don't know if it has a proper name
keep up the excellent lyrics! ^-^

Wow, really something different. Can you do "Homeland"? I liked Bran Bral. So keep it up!

I really like this.
I love all of the final fantasy music.
Do you know the words for melodies of Life?
if not write me.

You have a talent for lyrics. They're really impressive. All the ones I've tried to write suck. Continue!
(oh, where did you get the sound track?)

Cool! ^.^ You're so talented! I wish I could do that. Maybe I will! Write! ^_^

-Steeple3

Hey, you changed the lyrics. Very nice. I like these better than the last ones. Even the first chorus really sounded good:

The Rose of May shall bloom

When I stop being afraid

The Rose of May shall bloom

when I have been allayed

I liked that chorus very much. But these lyrics are still beautifull: like you. ^^

OMG! Your vocalizations are fantastic. I found myself listening to my MP3s and singing along with your words. ^_^

Interesting and often evocative. "Rose of May" is my favorite thus far. I would like to request "The Sneaky Frog and the Scoundrel" (just for fun) and "Bran Bal." If you were to post something for FFVI's "Dancing Mad" I would be eternally grateful.

Atma

Wow, this was good. I was listening to it when I read it. ^_^

My fave was Rose of May. **

Amazing! This is just great!

amazing. absolutely amazing. everthing matches the lyrics so well..i'm simply amazed and awed. ^_^

Cool. Wish I remembered the melody. Oh well. I remember though, the impression I got of the song was: sung/played by someone with bad intentions, trying to lull you to sleep, so you'd be out of the way. O_o Weird. Anyway, write!^_^

-Steeple3

HAHAHAHA! I beat the rap! HA! HAHA!

You were right! They shant catch on to ME! NOPE!Two reviews... LOL... HAHAHA! Ok, seriously now. ^^;;

WAY PAST COOL! Man, you are such a poet. You gotta publish a book sometime - I'd buy one and beg you to sign it! Yeah!

-TB