|Reviews for Death and a Second Chance|
| BekaJWP 1/3/06 . chapter 1
I'm not even trying to read that.
Paragraph breaks, please! At the very least before EVERY bit of dialogue. It's a shame to see an interesting idea made completely unreadable.
Oh, and 'u' is not a word. 'You' is. If your summary has spelling mistakes, no-one's going to read any further.
| Jean17 5/26/04 . chapter 1
I was rather enjoying the story. i would be ever so grateful if you would continue writing it.
| Me 9/26/02 . chapter 1
It is a little hard to read. You should redo it with breaks and paragraphs. If you use work just save it as a webpage and then post it again. Easy as that.