Hee, thanks for sharing, what a fun read. (if only it were that easy to be rid of mary sues... :)

LOL!
omw that was soo funny!
at first I thought...er mary-sue?
but i kept readng, and the end made me laugh SO hard!
=) amazing.

Hilarious! I love how you've managed to touch on almost every one of the substantial amount of cliches surrounding Mary Sues (especially the use of "cerulean"), and their origins backgrounds in SV fic.

Nice beginning--you get Chloe's tone down, and I really liked the comment about even computers dreaming of "bigger things". And Mary! Even on print her voice is grating--I can hear every squeak. Excellent job, and phrasing Chloe as a "bit player in a soap opera called 'The World According to Mary'" was probably my favorite part. It's right up there with the "You should...love...me..."

Seriously. Hilarious, and a very enjoyable read. Thanks for posting.

~Michelle

You made Chloe so evil! lol

MWA HA HA!!

You hit all the MS high notes just beautifully! All the stupid Smallville bits, too. Great fun little read!

LOL! That was great!

Hee hee :) Mary Sue, take that. Your usual fine satire work.

I love it when Chloe digs her heels in! heh.

Nice job!

Well that was intersting.The spelling and grammer was done really good.I didn't see any mistakes and the plot was really intersting to.I hope you'll write more Smallville stuff soon.