Aw! No way!! So all Anakin had to do was ask Yoda to give him permission and everything would've been fine!?!?! Hahaha nice! The ending was a little unbelievable, but I do love the idea that Yoda understands how ridiculous the 'no attachments' rule is. And I really liked the plot twist of Sabe being disfigured after the end of the Battle of Naboo. It was a great story, really well written. Nice job!

definitely one of my favourite fics of all time. I probably should admit that I've read this one a billion times, and am more than stoked to fight it on the website again. I can't tell you how long I've spent reading this off printed pages, and wanting to drop some reviews.
Truth is, this fic is that brilliant.
Although I do remember a sequel...?

perfectly angsty! =D

I loved what was in Obi-Wan's message. great chapter

very promising start =)

That was one of the best star wars stories i have ever read. Please continue it.

Hello!

Your story has been added to Knight and Maiden, a Sabewan C2 archive here in =) Keep up the Sabewan love!

Its great5! I love it!!

Very nice. 7

I found this story fairly enjoyable and you seem to write beyond your years. Well done!
Ivy

Why aren't you writing anymore? it is kind of disappointing, I really want to see what happens! :(

Wiw this was very good. Please write more. I am a forst fan fic, are you? Oh yeah mine is called Creatures of the night mine has to do with Anakin and a mystery girl.

I am going to cry. That was beautiful! I can't wait for more!