Nice job.

when di misty kiss ash what episode?

Another good one, you should make one where they actually get together.

sincerely,
evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

Interesting... In a violent outburst sort of way...

This was quite funny. You could easily make a story with this. You should try if you feel like it.

the phantom has hit!!

Kawaii!!! *Maura*

This is a good story. It was something to refresh my head, coz I'm about to set out on a Christmas fic... well, with the pace I'm going with Misty's Journey comes to mind, it'll be finished for Christmas! ¬_¬;
Back to your story, it was short and sweet, and different, but call me stupid, but what was with Ash+Misty kissing in the Orange Islands? Real or just fictional?

GREAT fanfic. i luv it! it sounds very convincing unlike some of the ones i've seen. but com on. ash isn't that dense! is he??? plz email me if u update! bye xxx

Heh, deniel is the word of the day when it comes to Ash and Misty's relationship. This is fun!

ash kissed misty in the orange islands?! or did u make that up? tell me!!!!

cute and funny. poor ash, he can be so dense sometimes but hey isn't that why we love him? well ja ne!

hey greate work keep it up

That's strange...But good non-the-less!!! ^_^