Aww.. It's so sad! I really hope you continue this one eventually! I can't wait to see what happens!

Becca

aww cliffhanger, naughty naughty ms. lady lithe

well I know you must hate me for my previous reviews but..

hey no ones perfect, specially me.

heheh

my stories are crap too

I'm so scared of them I didn't post them ;;

ohh wel

the story is getting better, but there NEEDS to be more body to it, don't be so lazy, mmk? XP

-autumn-

yay! no extras woot wot

and now for some inventive critisizing (which I feel bad about doing this some MORE since that's all I've done but I think you need to know this)

We we have an anime we love, we love to make stories with it in our head, and everyone WANTS to write them down but it's hard. some people write it down and are being DUMB about it.. I can TOTALLY see the cute scenes that you've written but all your story is like this:

He did this

she said that

she did this

he said back

emotions happened

and thing happened to easily

then he did this

so she did that

...

end

BORING.. if I didn't like your ideas so much this would be really really bad, also I like Kodocha too much to hate anything but PLEASE consider revising and.. ADD SOME DETAIL!

-AUTUMN-

p.s. please don't be mad, I would need to know if I did a not what I wanted job on a piece. and look at all the people who reviewed from above, they only review ch 5 cuz they were to lazy b4. WHATEVER.

dood. I am SO confused.. stop it with the extra thingz because it's like.. I always skip them to get to the story.. then I end up missing something important or you wrote your story funky so it's like mer/mer... It'a perty good so far

WHY is it that your.. 'little extra' was BIGGER then the amount of STORY that you wrote.. tsk tsk. Kinda good so far, but that's how all chapters are!

ACK! WHERE"S THE REST OF IT! MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! MORE!

it's kinda confusing... other than that, i think its pretty good...

update soon. please&thankyou

huh?

hurry up!UPDATE CHIBI SANA! OR SMALL SANA!THATS WHAT CHIBI IS!UPDATE!Please?

Please! continue! I REALLY like this fic!

I've read other people's review, and I must agree that it is good, HOWEVER, (I'm gonna be totally honest here, I don't mean to be mean, I just tend to criticize real hard... I should just say this in my bio, I'm always telling this to people...) Anyways, your story sequence, while it does make sense (in the way that I can understand what's happening), it's like... I dunno how to say this... it's like the reader is in the mind of a bee, flitting from one scene to another, fast. The emotions aren't really felt... and I think that you should have spent a little more time when Akito had that dream, or when he was in the hospital and had that vision thing about Sana. It's just a dream. I think that Akito should have started to worry when something starts to actually happen to Sana, right? I mean, she turned him down, and then he slits his wrist, then he worries... Well, I guess that still works, forget what I just said about that. The story is all action, what about feelings? Surroundings? And you threw in Takaishi so suddenly, in the middle of hecticness. Well that's all I wanted to say... I probably was a little too hard... and I'm sorry for that. Then again, I said this in a signed review, so I'm not hiding or anything. You'll know where to find me if you want to dish it out on me for saying a buncha stuff you didn't want to hear. But even so, continue with the story.

I luv this story please please continue!

fantastic! must read more!:)

Please update!