|Reviews for Loss of a Leader|
| TheFlygonWizard 3/6/13 . chapter 1
I liked the prequel but I just cant read this one.
| Krys 1/25/13 . chapter 1
You should consider making this a trilogy :) maybe have the next one show how Aurora and Ember are as adults and having a family, and maybe have someone try and destroy the powerful family. Just a thought ;) I loved these stories and I would love to see more pokemon fics from you
| Organ Man 5/25/12 . chapter 11
I don't usually read OC focused stories, but I really enjoyed this tale. The setting and characters were interesting and well developed, the scenario was interesting, and the dialogue was realistic and compelling. All in all, well done!
| Draco Oblivion 3/11/12 . chapter 11
That was a great ending to another great installment. Ember and Aurora are finall together and she's accepted Falkner as a father figure, the humans are a step closer to being closer to pokemon by remembering their shared past and Mew got some enjoyment. It was a great idea to have Aurora the way she was though, she's like the embodiment of the pact and the nicest trainer you're likely to meet it's pretty hard for Alistair to argue with that. :3
| Draco Oblivion 3/10/12 . chapter 10
Aw, he came down to see her because he's in lurrrrrrve X3
He plans to leave the Rockets? I guess the fact that it'd make dating Aurora easier is only an added bonus? XD
Aw, they're confident they'll get together, oh how things change :3
Wow I know Yukiko and his sister were disconcerting but now they're actual ninjas? That's kind of epic...
LOOOOOOOOOL at the inclusion of the writer, so random but what can you expect from someone who's desks as messy as that? XD
Aw, Ember's so awkward about having Yukiko lead :3
Hehe, Alistair's ready! The battle will soon come to a conclusion :D
| Draco Oblivion 3/10/12 . chapter 9
Oh, Brand. Wonder what he'dthink of his master going evil...
Lol so he's a rich kid? Figures :/
Lol now they're stuck with him XD
What the hell, Surge goes around pulling little girls hair? I've lost all respect for him -_-
She ought to have a dragon or grass/flying type wih her, be a bit more balanced...
Surge is twisted...
WOOOOOOOOOOO EMBER MY HERO! :'D
Hehe Surge got destroyed X'D
:O He's been watching her with Falkner? That's not creepy...
Well, that confession(?) went better than I thought :3
Lol at Brand calling Ember rude, I see the similarities but Brand is more pathetic
Blaine's revealed himself but it's pointless, it's too late for him
Aw, Ember's comforting her and even saying he'd of avenged her. He's so sweet :3
Aw, those two are bcoming o cute together. I'd definately rather have her date Ember than Falkner.
| Draco Oblivion 3/10/12 . chapter 8
So he did try to kill her luckiy he stalker was present :D
HA I thought it was Blaine XD
Hehe, home is where the heart is, I wonder if that has anything to do with the fact Aurora feels comfortable in Saffron city where her friend Ember just happens to be... XD
Hehe, Ember's behaviour's jokes X3
LOOOOOOOOL is Ember actually trying to make his play? XP
Lol Ember's so smooth with his insanely large income and gamecorner XD
LOOOOOOOL at winning a polygon XD
Yes! I knew it was her connection to Berry that gave her visions! I love to be right :D
Hmm, the balanced team thing is a problem I guess...
Who's the mysterious dude meant to know something about Blaine?
| Draco Oblivion 3/9/12 . chapter 7
Yay, looks like Aurora has a bg role to play, I wonder what the man in red(Blaine?) will do...
O.o I wonder why someone'd telekinetically attack her now... :/
LOOOOOOOOOOL that was so childish of Nick XD
Aw, I think it's sad that they'd change Lavendertown since it's the only ghost town... :(
Lol so Ember's pretty sneaky about his pok drop offs? XD
Wow, Laine is pretty famous and she's building quite a team of pokemon too :D
Wow, looking at serious issues, the ghosts deserve repsect but the people need money... :(
:O so we meet Morpheus and he's been causing almost as much trouble as his master...
OOOOOH so Morpheus ISN'T on his side, he's actually angry about his master's actions...
It was nice of Scar to protect them like that :)
Lol at the ghosts being free to rampage, Nick isn't portraying ghost users in a good light is he? :/
So I guess I was right then, Morpheus died so the psychic's targeting the leagu because he blames them for his loss...
| Draco Oblivion 3/9/12 . chapter 6
Aw, first he wants to avoid the city because it's too cheerful but now get this, two attractive females in bikinis have the NERVE to hit on him. I really feel sorry for this guy :/
Hehe, lol at Scar starting fighs with the messenger birds XD
Maybe the old gym leaders a pokefanatic, doesn't want humans hurt because he doesn't believe people have a right to use them, therefore being against the league?
Hehe, looks like Rusty's going to have to own up about his kid XD
Lol bringing up the battle with Brock was a great way to let her bring up Berry XD
Aw, Skarmory's a proud daddy, even if he was keeping it quiet XD
Aw, Ember needs Laine and Aurora to keep girls off of him XD
LOOOOOOOOOL at "special friends", "travelling companions" and "we've been everywhere together" is it just me or does that sound weird? X'D
Aw, Ember's so depressing and supicious but he's cool and interesting so it's okay, it'd be interesting to see him actually try to become champion though XD
Hehe, he's so aggressive, luckily Aurora's ther to cool him down ;)
Aw, Aurora was aying how great he is and that he could have any girl he wanted, this is the point where he should say "how about you" but I doubt that'll happen...
:O He basically just confessed saying he's too noble to hit on her when she likes Falkner, I figured Falkner'd have something to do with the bitterness...
Wow, he even messes with gym leaders minds... O.o
Is that his pokemon that was killed? I'm guessing he blames the whole league/ trainer system for that... :/
| Draco Oblivion 3/9/12 . chapter 5
LOOOOOOOOL the mysterious pokemon finally answered XD
I love hoe Brock's flirting with a 14 year old girl though depending on his age that may not be that weird...
:O WAS SKARMORY THE DAD? :D
LOOOOOOOOL at Bruce intimidating Brand into answering the questions XD
Aw, Scar's anger's so cute :3
Hehehe Aurora appreciates Brock's flirting because it makes her feel attractive, I'm pretty sure he isn't the first one to hit on her XD
Wow, so Brand is loyal then if Falkner says so...
Lol at implying that people can't speak badly about Falkner in front of Aurora, I guess Brand isn't the only fanatic around XD
Yay she got a new pokemon, I'm sure Grandwing and Rusty'd make good friends :)
LOOOOOOOOL so it was a mew making Rora think she was crazy, maybe that explains what's been giving her visions and how it telepathically talks to her...
| Draco Oblivion 3/9/12 . chapter 4
So we learn a bit more about the hunter then...
O.o he can arrack them with a mysterious force without even being there?
Aw, they found the body, hopefully they won't have to go far into victory road to find help though :/
Wow, that was nice of Ember to rush back when he heard news of the death :3
So the man in red works for the hunter guy who's a powerful psychic but is limited in his attacks due to exhaustion...
:O I just realised he probably thought the person Laine reported dead was Aurora... I'm so slow :/
Atleast the mysterious pokemon is enjoying watching them :)
| Draco Oblivion 3/8/12 . chapter 3
Something invisible following her... ghost type pokemon?
Aw that kid was just doing his job :3
:O WOW Gary's a DOUCHEBAG! XD
Aw, Aurora was so nice to the little kid too bad the battle ended the way that it did... :/
Wait a second, blue familiar eyes, that wouldn't be Ember's mum would it?
:O HAHAHAHAHAH YES I KNEW IT! Lol at him being there the whole time though XD
The, "Our son has great need of his friends, I believe." from Ember's dad was kind of creepy...
Yay Aurora has an excuse to talk to her boyfriend :3
Aw, it's finally out in the open how betrayed he felt that she didn't visit him... :(
Aw, I love how he just goes off to sort out all the problems in the world, he's so cool :')
SO we see a little more of the pokemon that's been watching them, I'm glad though I still have no idea what it is...
| Draco Oblivion 3/8/12 . chapter 2
:O Lance is a suspect too?
Ah, I'm so glad Lance shouted some sense into the room, hopefully Aurora and friends'll find the real culprit soon enough to free their red head compatriot of suspicion...
I'm glad Lance is helping them out with their plan :)
Lol, in the fight with Blain both sides are annoyingly arrogant, I don't know who I want to lose more XD
I love how easily Aurora destroyed Blain's replacement XD
Aw, Blain seems kind of suspicious now... :/
| Draco Oblivion 3/8/12 . chapter 1
Ember's as cool as ever, I'm thinking the criminals are extremists who want pokemon released from humans, it'd make sense then that they attack trainers and free the pokemon...
Aw, Ember seems so bitter that Aurora hasn't visited, I guess he likes her more than he used to let on :)
Laine's coming yay! I was wondering when we'd see her but I wasn't expecting her on the boat :D
LOOOOOL Laine wouldn't be Laine if she didn't tease Aurora about guys XD
I love how Aurora and Ember are taking such foreward roes in the meeting, Team Rocket may survive yet :)
Damn it, people are blaming Ember AGAIN! :(
| Nianque 11/7/11 . chapter 11
Just as awesome if not more so than the previous story. Like I said before, I like how original you have made this story. This flows better than any story or paper I have attempted to write. I am deeply envious of your writing abilities.