What do I think of this?

I think you're brilliant. This was awesome. Great story. Thanks.

One of the better Houston Knights 'fics on the web. Good characterization, excellent dialogue, and I certainly hope to read more of them from you!

I really enjoyed your story, I hope that you will write another one.

Okay, I confess: I cried right along with Levon and would have liked to have been around to give him a hug. I cried at least three times in this story. (In some circumstances that would sound like a bad thing but here it's a good thing!)

You did a wonderful job in keeping the characterizations true to the TV originals. You covered quite a wide range of emotions, evoking empathy, sympathy, apprehension, anxiety and humour. That's quite a lot for a four chapter story!

Favourite lines: "Don't be too stubborn to appreciate what God's put before ya 'cause you're too busy missing what He's taken away." and "LaFiamma smiled. 'I think it's safe to say it's flooded, kid.'"

I'm glad I came across this story after all four chapters were up. I'd have found it really difficult to wait for the next installment otherwise. ...Thanks for the story.

Great ending, Cheryl! Nice way to prove to the boys that they really are friends.

Loved your story. I only wish more people would write stories about Houston Knights. I always loved the relationship between Lundy and LaFiamma and you have it down perfectly.

I loved the story - please write another one! The story was full of emotion & suspense!

This is a great line, Cheryl: "But partners, we get front row seats to the whole show... in living color." And being a cop, it hits home... But! You better have chapter 4 up soon, leaving us there with LaFiamma MIA, is just plain mean!

Another good chapter, Cheryl! Can't wait for more!

This story was great, short and sweet! I loved it. I think I held my breath the entire time. Please write more soon. This series was fantastic, I always look for more fanfic. Thank you and keep up the good work!

Great story! Good to have another one posted. Hope to read more from you soon!