This is very, very well done, Ryou must have nearly had a heart attack.

nice lemon

-OO- ...that was..ha-cha-cha.

o.o; I know you wrote this a long time ago, but would you think of making a sequel? there's alot of reveiws? *gives you all the food in here house* ? is that enough? pweeasee?

Aww... cute...

Oh my God, oh my God, OH MY GOD! *shrieks like an insane schoolgirl* Oh wait. *blinks* I AM an insane schoolgirl! Oh the irony! Anyways...that was a good story. Way too short, but good nonetheless. Geh. How d'you spell that freaking word! Evil... Ok, lost my point. So: I think you need to make these longer. Yeah there's a lot, but it's nop fun if it's that short! So be nice to a poor hentai and make these longer, ok? Oh...and ya think you could make another one with Ryou/Bakura? Onegai shimasu!

Wow...

How did you manage to maake something to smutty with five hundred words and an R rating?

I think I need a cold shower.

oh my gosh that was brilliant... may have been short but yaness for ryou and bakura

dontcha just love itwhen dreams turn to realitly... well in ryous case i think it was a lot better

kk i'll cya around then bi bi

russle

cute!

Awesome! So short yet so good!

wowie...

That was good. Very...interesting. Bakura is so sneeky. Ryou let him do that? Even why he knew that he was awake? Well...I think it was very...sweet. Good job.

That is one of the best Ryou/Bakura stories I have ever read. You manage to keep YB evilness without being abusive. I really liked it.

To short. make longer. need more discription:)

Heheheh... go Bakura...

is drooling on floor