Hey,

That was a very good story. I'm not usually a fan of the romance thing, but your title intrigued me.

It wasn't that obvious who it was, and I am still not certain, but I like to think that it was either Obi-Wan and Padme, or Jaina and Kyp.

I was also wondering if you could email me who exactly the people were. I would really appreciate it.

I look foward to more of your work,

-Kenobi's Girl

Wonderful little ficlet, but I would like to see you progress it to find out what happens. I do think it's a bit obvious who it is, but that is because I am a Kyp/Jaina shipper, therefore it's easy for me to pick out that the male is definitely Kyp, and since the only female apprentice he's taken that he has hurt is Jaina... I definitely say it's Kyp and Jaina.

~~Jilly

I believe that it is Kyp. Prematurely silver strands. Dark hair. Not knowing who he is, not know who she is. Hurting her in the worst ways. It's Kyp and Jaina alright.

Whoo...hotness. No, it wasn't really all that obvious who it was...but awesome anyway. Hot hot hot.

No, it's not obvious who it is. A good piece, but it seems to terminate in the middle! I don't usually write this in reviews, but I want to know how does this continue.
You've got a good balance in love scenes, in my opinion. It's not that common.
Perfect technichally speaking, but to my tase a little more soul is missing.