Please update soon its really good! And could you pm me if your going to continue. You haven't updated in a while and I'm not sure.

Too much black and white, no gray AT ALL.

Please, even muggles (however low you think of us) would put up a resistance, WE AREN'T BLIND YOU KNOW. The british armed forces would make piece meal out of voldy. With their Challenger IIs, and harrier jets they would destroy their army in less then two or three seconds. If it came to it, nukes would be highly effective, I DON'T CARE HOW STRONG THEY ARE THEY CANNOT STAND UP TO THOUSANDS OF DEGREES THAT COMES WITH A THERMONUCLEAR FUSION REACTION.

I love this story and I was rereading it for I think the third time when I got to that scene with Harry and Erin and BAM! I was suddenly smacked in the face with the thought of those two as the pairing. I don't know what you have planned for later, but I just had to share this thought since it wouldn't leave me alone and I think it would be sweet and surprising. Anyways, sorry about the randomness! ^^

while i agree with your idea of the charecter list and thanks to reviewers you chould arange it differently like put i thank and then a name tab a name ect. because it adds a lot of length to the scroll bar and some readers use it to determine if they have time to read the chapter or not like me usualy i can make a resonable guess as to the number of words based of the scroll bar and then guess how much time it will take me to read the chapter

Your story is brilliant and I can't wait for the next update!

im sppechless it truly is a wonderful story...so much intricacy and careful planning as well great insights into the magical world.wow. u even had me tearing up for harry as well..ur a Paper gifted :P

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I think that Harry should go Voldy-hunting-kickingass!

Overall this is quite good, but I'm a little disappointed in not seeing a story that seems really close to the end updated in a little over a year.

I see only a few issues with the story so far. First of all, there are various little typos and things that careful proofreading would likely easily fix. Second, while you have many characters, I think your characterization is an area you might want to focus on. With the scope of the story, alternating focus to some of the other characters would likely have been worthwhile. The third issue with the story is that you involved the non magic world, yet the non magic world was useless, which seems implausible. If things had gotten this bad they would have been launching nuclear cruise missiles and who knows what else. Many death eaters would die, and so too probably would Voldemort, if it was a direct hit.

Again, overall this is a good story and I hope you get a chance to finish it.

Its a good story but you should diversify your dialogs a little bit like in Italic for the Dragons when they speek and at the end or between scenes add somthing like that - or *

You may want to check your spelling of the word plane...

This is amazing work! I couldn't put it down.. it took me three days to read it.. and I stayed up really late just read this fanfic!
Please keep on writing this! (It's been ages since you last updated... maybe.. I missed the put on hold warning in the summary..)
Anyways, this was a great fanfiction to read and all your stories were well thought out and planned.

:)

like the story so far hope it develops further ^^

oh wow I found this story two days ago and read it all I have to say you are a great writer and I hope you continue this story it is wonderful !

it is in my top fav of 5 ! the best

please update soon! begging!

hi, I really dont want to be the one to say this but it is my duty to tell you. Ive been reading fanfiction for a really long time and i remember at least a little bit of everystory ive read and i remember reading this story on . if you have an account on that site and have uploaded it there as well then im sorry for bothering you i just thought i should say something just in case