i loved your description of Hermione. Nice one :)

I liked the way you wrote Millicent...and even before looking at the picture at the end, I very much had a feel for a woman who had been stocky and ugly as a teenager, but who had grown into herself. Someone not pretty like a model, but someone who'd stopped trying to be one. Don't think I can explain it any better than that... ^__^ Anyway, I liked!

Cool..
I really don't understand why you don't get more reviews. Your stories are very well wrote. Granted, a little confusing if not read correctly, but still well off.
'And said goodbye the moment before she was sticking out her hand, sliding a thumb under your wrist, saying hello.' What, pray tell, exactly did that mean..? I'm so clusless some times...

Very nice. You just have an amazing command of language. Gorgeously written.

Beautifully done, as always.