For some reason, as I was reading I thought more of it being from Logan's point of view than from Max's. But, at any rate, this is very well written. You have a talent for poetry.

Wow, what a great way to show what life is like for Max at Manticore and how much she's missing Logan. Thanks.

Wowzers! This piece was really deep and thought provoking! I'm glad you decided to write it!