Found this yesterday and started reading before I realised how long it was, but I got hooked and finished it today, to the detriment of the jobs I was supposed to be doing before going to work :-) Excellent story, well done. Characterisation was very good, plot kept moving, so I just had to keep reading and thankfully it wasn't riddled with spelling mistakes like so many fics are.

wow. great story.

I was re-reading this story, and was once again blown away. That you made this crossover work in the first place is in impressive, but your writing is superlative, and so very realistically written. This is probably one of the best crossovers I've ever read.

I've been looking for a BTVS/Pretender crossover forever! You're the best!

Scratch that it does have a sequel. Yay!

Loved it loved it. It needs a sequel. I liked that the characters were all in cannon and that you did not Mary Sue any of the main characters.

okay, I started with reading Equinoxium... i don't even remember how, but I'm glad I did...and ended up here. This was another fabulous story by you!

So, this is what I want you to do: put me on your mailing list for your first published work of fiction! I am VERY serious. You should write an original fic and submit it to whoever controls the rights to BtVS books. Get yourself PUBLISHED girl! It can be done! I'm not a kid saying this, I'm grown and know good writing when I see it, even if I can't always write it.

your writing has the appeal to draw in people who may not even read this genera.

Now I'm off to Racing With Destiny. the first ever HP related fic to ever have been read by me.

ria

I've been debating wether to read this fic for a while now - i started it ages ago, but it seemed quite involved in the pretenderverse and i've never seen it. i think your charicterisations are spot on. i'm looking forward to going on to the next in this series. i especially loved your portrayal of the relationship between buffy and giles.

Really, really well done! It was a little darker at times than I usually like, but your writing style and the progression of the story kept me interested. You kept with the characterizations really well, too, and for that I am ever thankful. There were a few (very few) minor grammatical problems, but nothing that detracted from the story in any which way or form. I’ll definitely be reading the rest of the trilogy. You are an amazing writer! Keep it up!

very interesting and well written.

Wow. That was incredible. Unbelievable. You made it all so lifelike; I grieved with the characters, felt their worry, their relief, their agony. I particularly liked that you brought Faith into it, and you didn't make her all candy and flowers the minute she woke up. The way you were hard-hearted enough not to give your characters a reprieve or make it sweet evil was excellent as well, and is what I consider one of the main faults of my own fics.

Well done.

In the realm of above average fan fiction, there are decent, good, great,and truly exceptional works. I would count this as one of the few truly exceptional ones.

ok, think i'm, once again, far too late, but hey, you deserve every review i've sent, even if some weren't exactly...reviews, more of ramblings from the Crazy ONe. And I wonder why I write such good Dru's...
Anyway, loved the story. I think i must have reviewed almost every single chapter, and so now i'm going to reread the first chapter of the sequel, now that i know the back story, and start there, and see where this 'twist of fate' will lead our favorite heroines!

is this gonna be a Jarod/Parker fic, cuz that'd be sorta cool...he took up so much of her life for the past four years, why shouldn't he take up more of her life, now that she's no longer chasing him?
And are you gonna have Parker go back to the Centre, and sorta do and Angel to it, turn it around, make it a good business, no more of this abducting and stuff?
Hope so...She and Jarod could help people, if they chaged the Centre into a good place...

witchy witch! WITCHY WITCHY WITCH!
Evil plot lines!
DAMN THE EVIL PLOT LINES!
And now it's time fore bed...serious thoughts all night...woried thoughts all night...not fair!