Aww, that was very bearably cute. ;)

Update

aww that was so cute! i seem to say that for all your stories dont i? but thats all right isnt it? loved this one! -leah

Oh this was absolutely wonderful! I normally read stuff on , but yours was recommended so I read it. You're a wonderful writer and you should continue! Oh and if you want another good story (well i think so) you could try reading mine. It's here on and on . It's Harry Potter and the Forest of Kavan. I'm currently writing the sequel, HP and the Covenant of the Triange, if you wanted to try that too. Cheers!

aaahhh! That was wicked sweet!

Awe awe awe awe awe awe!

You are, by FAR the BEST H/H FANFICTION WRITTER, EVER!

Write more stuff Write more stuff Write more stuff!

Please please please please!

this is wicked! i LOVE it! one of the best ever! update very soon!

Aw! Cute cute cute! hehe! These are so adorable and c- sweet! lol, I love them:)

Spazzy

This must be my lucky night or something. Thank you for adding on...it's a brilliant story. Great job yet again! Hope you update soon!

This is so cute. Sounds like a fun RPG :)

Awwww... Love this. More soon.

omg that was wicked! (wicked good!) u HAVE to update asap!

That was great! It definately made my night at work a bit brighter and happier. Thank you! Are you going to post some more? I hope so...keep up the good work!

Thanks for posting the session, it's good to see my 10 years of RP experience is finally paying off. You're doing great, you've come a long way in RP quality. Pretty soon, you'll be writing scrolling responses and mini-novel replies. By the way, are we going to continue this? It looks like another session may be in order...

Wow. I seriously didn't know what to think when clicking on the link for this story (RPG transcript? Puh-leeze.) however, this just blew me away.

You two are far better than anyone I've ever RP'd with in my life. This truly was great.

u have to do more that is a really good story