Beautifully done! I'm glad that even though they were all apart, they eventually were together again. I love it! My poor Feanor, didn't realize his wife was the one he loved the most till he died. Men are stupid sometimes, aren't they? Keep writing!
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Namarie!
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Morwen Eleniel

Beautifully done! I'm glad that even though they were all apart, they eventually were together again. I love it! My poor Feanor, didn't realize his wife was the one he loved the most till he died. Men are stupid sometimes, aren't they? Keep writing!
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Namarie!
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Morwen Eleniel

Cool stuff B...hey, what's a "Finwe?" But anyway, I like how you incorportated a story and fit it like a poem. What do they call that...a narrative? Yeah, that's it! Anyway, good job, it's great

I love the two stories that you have recently written, please continue with a story on how they finally are reunited with eachother. I would like this very much and would be very grateful.

I liked the second and third chapters very much. You display the pain the couples feel from being torn apart, and I think your concepts about Nerdanel entering Mandos to be with her family and Amarie refusing to marry are very touching. This was nice.

Oh, that was so sad! Very moving.

I assume you're going to write about the separations of the rest of the couples in 'Ordinary Day'.

Continue, please!