So CUTE! FLUFFY! KAWAII! and what-not!

I loved it!

good story but... That was so not pg13 not that i think it needed anything to make itpg13 but i think you are doing an injustice to yourself by saying that it is pg13

awwwww how cute

Yep, yep, yep! MIMOE FOREVA!

Awww, kawaii Jyoumi again! _ Happy happy happy! Maybe it could be a bit longer, tho. There, that enough constructive criticism? ;; Sayonara!

That was so sweet, and well-written! Joe and Mimi are really cute together. There's proof in the movie. Cool fic!

MIMIJOE FOREVER! Yay! Another Jyoumi/Mimoe! One thing: Next time, make it longer. I like llllllooooonnnnngggggg fics! P

Joumi forever

I... LOVED IT! Sorry, need to do that! Mimoe foreva! Great story. *grinz*

Awwww... Really cute young Mimi and Jyou story. More to follow? Anyways, I really enjoyed it! Beautiful work!

*inhales* I like. like alot. I want more.

yes, it is a little flighty, gappy, and all that junk for disconnected story _ (don't mean to put you down). But true, the effort's there. Although it takes more than effort to make a good story. You might be the hardest working person in the world, but if the end result isn't good or above average, you are graded by your end result, not effort (well, your effort counts. But nobody knows how much effort you put into it but you. They will all look to the end result to judge your effort. The end result sort of sums up your effort). You got to make your effort show! (I learned this the hard way so don't make my mistake) Um... I really don't mean to put you down just now. My advise to you is to go back on this story later on in life when you have time and revise it. Just keep changing stuff little by little over a period of time. Your end result of that would probably be better than what you have now. I'm sorry again if I put you down in any way in this review. You wanted contructive critiscism, you got it.

Aww! Maybe they rushed into the 'love' thing a little fast, but still was awesome! _ Seii

Jyoumi forever! _ I liked this a lot. More please ::smiles::