Mika has never come across as this type of character to me, but it falls into place very nicely. Job well done~ :)

omg!! will you please continue? it's so god! ^^

While I'll admit this seems a little OOC to me, as far as Mika's concerned, it is well-written and very lovely. And, having read the rest of the parts of the story, I certainly don't mind, considering what came from it. The rest of the parts are absolutely gorgeous, and they've been making me fangirl Tohma quite a bit.

I also must congratulate you on writing a fic about the ever-complex relationship between Tohma and Mika. Their relationship is truly fascinating, which is probably why I adore reading about it.

i enjoy reading your gravi works with Mika and Tohma! they are very very good! you really get into the whole storyline without killing it by changing it too much! bravo!

woah, intense. i actually had tears in my eyes. never imagined Mika breaking down like that. but it was very well-written and i love Mika & Tohma. i highly enjoyed this piece.. i'll go read the rest too now ^^

so dark and so wonderfully angsty. Mika's suicide is a wonderful idea and you carried it out so well. Great fic.

That's so sad! You've really captured Mika's despair in a totally in character way though. You made her...not reasons, but the lead up to her suicide realistic, but at the same time she's miraculously unwimpy. Great job!

Oh my gosh!!!

I just read the fic and it's great!!
It's so sad, I had to cry and I really mean with tissue's and a lot of tears.
Please keep it going, I can't wait to read other fics of you!!

That was so touching...*sniff* Very nice, well, I'm a horrible reviewer..gomen nasai... ^^;

;_; Nooooo! Don't die Mika! Gravi has too few female characters as it is! This was good and very sad. Bravo.

I like it. really, I do. Wish it was longer though

"It was so dark."

O.O DUN KILL MIKA!!!!! Gahh~! ;-; I've always liked her! she was way cool! and I have *always* felt sorry for her! !! o.o! *sniffles* I think you should make her live!

How you wrote this was simply heartbreaking! I read this during third period at school and was like, *gasp* O.O! I think I scared the people sitting next to me...I was like, NO DON'T KILL HER!! >.>;; *coughs* This was too sad ;-; Poor Mika...she's married a man who loves her brother and hardly chills with her *sniffles* that's not right! *cry* you should have Tohma realize how much he loves her and and and...yeah! ^_^_^_^ >.>;; I love TohmaxMika...even though I love TohmaxSakano tooo... x.x I'm so torn!!

*GLOMP* you soooo have to write more on this! AND DON'T KILL MIKA! unless it would add to Tohma's guilt! *cackle* Tohma needs to feel guilty for what he did to her!! and btw, why *was* he back early?

Good fic. Poor Mika... watching the anime I often thought she should have pack her bags and leave all the troubled bishounen behind

aww... i love Mika!!! you made me cry! *sniff*

you mentioned 5 story arc, will it all be focused on Mika? or stories on diff characters? do post them real quick!!!

^_~

gambatte ne!

oh my God! Don't let Mika die onegai!!! I like Mika very much!!!!! ^^TohmaxMika forever!!!! *chuckles*