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| Stealth Photographer 2008-01-08 ch 4,  | abuseSadf but a happy ending |
| Stealth Photographer 2008-01-08 ch 3, | abuseI hope the Barbain wins the battle |
| Stealth Photographer 2008-01-07 ch 2, | abuseCan't wait to see how the battle turns out and glad they are so smart. |
| Stealth Photographer 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseand so Our Story Begins... Can't wait to see where it ends |
| ShadyDexter 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseSomething gives the feeling Rach isn't going to be finishing this story. Damn shame. It might have been fun. |
| Meep Artist 2005-01-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt is... interesting. Great storyline, but a few sentences, particularly dialogue, seem rushed. Its the first Civilization fanfic I've ever read, but I like it! |
| Orta316 2004-03-20 ch 1, | abuseDefinately a good read. Keep up the good work. |
| Starlight the Wanderer 2003-08-08 ch 4, | abuseBravo! *Claps* This was a great story! Great job! I hope to see more good works from you. |
| Justokre 2003-08-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseInteresting story. Maybe I'll write one like this... |
| Killer 2003-08-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseSwet!Hey can you make a sequal because this is just a great story. |
| Book-Master 2003-04-24 ch 4, | abuseOH! )Begins to bluber and weep( WAH! SUCH A DRAMATIC ENDING! -_-, THAT'S IT! It's OVER!? Studio cleaner: Sir, yes, the shows over. Book-MAster: Is the uh, snack bar still open? En taro Adun -Book-Master |
| Book-Master 2003-03-30 ch 3, | abuseIT's getting pretty good it's such a limited subject... keep writing! -Book-Master |
| Starlight the Wanderer 2003-01-03 ch 2, | abuseThis is a great story, please continue. I hope you update soon. |
| Book-Master 2002-12-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseAWESOME!!! KEEP IT UP!!! Oh, and the previous review, if you read, ti says that they kept discovering techs, so, there you are. |
| CIV FAN 2002-12-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseI liked this story... but there were some parts that needed fixing. Why did the Babarian lord have Legions(Iron Working) when he didn't know bronze working? Please don't take this as a flame. |