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| Drusilla Braun 2006-08-18 ch 2, | abusePlease continue |
| Lady-jolly 2004-10-06 ch 2, | abuseWhat happend? why did you stop?! Please continue. Your doing such a good job keep it up please. Gob Bless you Lady Jolly |
| blessed-goddess 2003-08-03 ch 2, | abuseAh yes a good beginning...but there has to be a lot of spice...it cant just be this throughout the whole story Please finish |
| JMBangelgirl 2003-03-27 ch 2, | abuseThis is pretty good so far. Though I think it should have been rated PG for language. There were a few grammar and spelling typos. For instance, commas missing, but I'll overlook that for the plot seems to be thickening. Please update 'cause I'm reading. |
| Kas 2002-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abusehey! what happens next? your on a roll,don't stop the ball yet |
| AngelWings07 2002-09-24 ch 1, | abuseOh come on! I need more than that! Keep writing! ~*!Angie!*~ |