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hnsolo77 2006-10-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseumm... there is a serious flaw in the story, if you actually learned from sex ed, yes men make thousands of sperm, quite often, and if the jusenkyo curse caused all the sperm to become egg cells ranma would still only release one per cycle, sometimes 2 or 3 at once though this is rare in life a woman is born with all the egg cells she will need in life, and they do not produce them at any rate after birth, they release them but thats it
Materia-Blade 2006-03-05 ch 2,	abuseOh my...
absolute tableness 2005-10-04 ch 2,	abusei feel so...disturbed...not bad though...but very disturbing...disturbed
Sailor Frogspawn 2005-07-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseHeh, looking too deep into the science is dangerous :) HOX-A10. Can't see why this shouldn't be created by the switch like everything else is. After all, the Musk HAVE mated with animals tossed into the Nyannichuan, and have had children with them. Jusenkyo girls do seem to be able to get pregnant. Sperm maturation: You got me there, it takes 70 days for sperm to mature in the testis. I guess you'd have to assume that when Akane became a boy she had a full complement of immature sperm in the testis, so she could pump out finished sperm at the same rate as a boy (2 days will be enough for that). By corollary you'd have to say that Ranma would have a full complement of immature eggs in her overy (+ the extras from all the mature sperm that are no longer part of the ovary, so were converted individually) Uterus can't accept that many implants. Probably so, no idea what the maximum is (15 is certainly possible though). Might have to wave the 'magic' banner here :) Of course, detailed scientific analysis of a fic like this is bound to poke holes in it, it's not exactly meant to be taken too seriously :)
Jonakhensu 2005-07-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseYes, I'm reviewing again. I feel the need to nitpick. First, by the time Akane would have enough sperm, Ranma wouldn't be fertile amy longer. Also, the commplete and utter lack of the HoxA10 gene would make embryo implantation impossible, negating Ranma's downfall. Also, the uterus would be incapable of supporting that many embryos at one time.
dogbertcarroll 2005-07-02 ch 2,	abuseblink That was just bizarre. Nice work.
ranma hibiki 2005-07-02 ch 2,	abuse...you wrote another chapter...unbelievable!! that and this chapter is just plain wierd, but im glad you updated
vizeerlord 2005-07-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseyou are one sick _. the only thing I can say I hope to see more of your work and soon.
Rubel 2005-07-01 ch 2,	abuseYou have a very sick and twisted mind you know.
Jonakhensu 2005-06-30 ch 2,	abuseAgain, disturbing as all hell, but funny.
Jonakhensu 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseWhile it is disturbing as all hell, that was actually rather funny.
imortis 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseYour one sick bastard, you make me want to find out where you are and bring out my special axe. Its nice and big and has three spiked blades instead of just one for better mutalation of those who upset me a bit. I use it only on those authors I really really really just... I want to rip out your eye balls for subjecting me to this disgustingness. Don't let my eyes settle upon your form or I will rip out your intestines and make hotdogs and feed them to you over and over and over and... Don't do this again. imortis
law-kun 2005-06-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseI don't think it would work like that. Men may have millions of sperm, but woman have millions of eggs as well. the difference is that men can manufacture sperm constantly while woman start with loads of eggs and they just die constantly. Also men release massive amounts of sperm while woman only release one egg at a time from their ovaries. Ok, enough of the medical leacture. The idea is still disturbingly sick!
DragonGolem 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was a truly special story and by that I mean I believe that Satan lives in your computer and sells used cars to dyslexic penginus...er...pengiuns...penguins. heh... keep it up...
Morden Night 2005-02-12 ch 1,	abuseYeah that was pretty ** up. And short too. You should watch out for that because this particular fanfiction doesn't adhere to the rule put out by It's too short. Be careful with that. One of my fics got booted for being "Too short" and it was longer than this.

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