Great story, I still love it after reading it several times. Not perfect, writing-wise, but the story itself is great. I know I would love to see a one-shot or short story about Casey and Remus and their child...:)

Things I Liked

- Lupin (who doesn't?)

- The mention of house elves (by Hermione)

- Casey's reference to wands as "big sticks"

- The general writing was pretty fair decent

Things I Didn't and Still Don't Like

- Lucius Malfoy: what's with the Sou'western accent? I couldn't wait for him to break out into "Y'all git home, now."

- Draco Malfoy: if a guy's a pushover, leave it at that. Don't make him a pansy. He already has enough to deal with.

- Casey: rather Mary-Suish.

- the author notes: please, please - if it were a real novel (like Pinocchio as a real boy) - then it wouldn't have author notes. Yes? (just as Pinocchio wouldn't have, er, strings and such growing out of his shoulder blades). Notes at beginning - okay. Middle - drive me nuts. (M, cashews...)

- the Voldemort thing: detracted from story! I wanted less Moldy Voldy, more Lupin.

Generally, I liked your story. I'm madly in love with Lupin. That's probably why. What pre-pubescent girl wouldn't want to imagine herself in the midst of a torrid love affair with the handsome, wolfish, worn-but-still-warm Defence Against the Dark Arts professor?

Okay...just to let you know, most of this review was written for the entertainment of the two people sitting on either side of me. So disregard most of it. I enjoyed your story.

*NOTE FROM A PERSON SITTING BESIDE HER* LIES ALL LIES!

This is such a wonderful fanfic that I have ever read. It has nearly all I've been looking for. I hope you make another fanfic of what would happen next.

OMG! Your story was SO beautiful! THe ending was SPECTACULAR! I guess I'm just a sap for mushy love stories... but I couldn't help myself. I WAS SOBBING! You scared me half to death when Snape attacked Casey in chapter 20, and then when Dumbledore was talkign about some one dying in chapter 21, I just KNEW you had killed off Casey. I'm glad you didn't though, that would have REALLY sucked! You are such a talented writer! You seem to make the characters emotions coem alive! Please write more stories, I'm DYING to read your next one!

YOUR STORY ROCKED! AND ROCKS! I hope to see a sequil..._ Pretty Please with cherries on top :(

Love it! Thanks

I must admit... I almost cried. *bursts out in tears and is bawling madly* GOOD JOB!

::sigh:: no matter how many times I read this I'll never get tired of it. It's just so AWESOME!

this chapter was really good!

it's really good! i just need the time to finish reading the whole thing...

Heeeee heeee! This is about the 10th time I've read this story. I LOVE IT! I just can't stop reading it because it's so great! This has got to be my favorite fic on all of !

I am also going to e-mail this review to you because you said that you forgot your password to this account, so you'll probably never see this review unless you get in in an e-mail.

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

ilike it a lot!

I absolutely adore this fic! That's about all I have to say, I'm putting it on my favs list and keep up the good writing!

great!

That was absolutally great great great. You have no idea how scared i was in that last part I thought it was Casey ( im sure thats what you wanted) well thank you for fully scaring the outta me, i needed that and I really hope you keep on writting you have a great talent. Well thats all cya!