haha, that was a cute ending :)

it was funny

LOL, that was funny

lol

I thought this was great, nothing is too fluffy, some of mine, ( even though their longer and don't have just romance ), are fluffier than this! Don't doubt yours;ef, it's not good for an author! And I liked this, something worth writing a sequal for!

sincerely,
evan, a fan of aaml

p.s- the ending was priceless -EVAN AAML

Cute, short, and sweet. I'd like to see more work of yours if it's all this good. Keep writing fluff!

That was pretty good, but you should have made Ash do something after he read the part about Misty calling him cute. Good Job!

Come on! Sequel! Sequel! this is not complete! It does not feel like it's at the end! More chapters! You HAVE to continue this! It just is perfect for a good story. Add a plot and it would really get interesting, but as it is it feels like a fragment of a story that yearns to be completed. Yet, you are the author and if you decide not to continue it, I can't do a thing about it. Oh well. Anyway, that was quite good.

ooh...how cute.plz write more.how about what da letter said?

Now that is a VERY creative and cute way to sign a letter! *Maura*

The phantom is kinda confused.yet content!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww

Actually, I find it funny as well... In the positive way, mind you!

it was cool

Nice! Short, but sweet. You could have made it a LITTLE longer, though. But I still liked it. Keep it up.