Hey I love your story seeing as I'm a hopless romantic myself. You did an awsome job of keeping the two in character not to mention the fact that your an awsome writer i've already read this and kitchen cozy and i intend to read them all

This is another one that's almost painfully adorable. Do I assume for the record that it's finished? Like all good things?

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Aw! Your best story up to now, I think. *nods* First one that made me feel all giddy and teary-eyed. Very pretty and cute! I love a more bolder Ranma.

This was so sweet!

I like your story, so please do not get upset with the rest of my tough remarks:
Some of the descriptions are really beautiful, some a little over the top with Ranma. Akane is cute and pretty, but she is not graceful or delicately beautiful. Also, Akane is NOT a cry baby. She rarely if ever cries. In your story, she might cry only once, not the multiple times you have her do so. You should re-work the story so that Akane gets lost in the rain a lot longer and as a result gets a bad cold. Or, to avoid the overly used fanfic plot of Akane or Ranma getting sick, you could have Akane be her normally accident-prone/clumsy self and slip in the forest and sprain an ankle. I would not have Ranma save her, as this is also overdone. Akane is a tough girl who would find a walking stick and haul her butt back to the cabin. A bit more on Akane's perspective would be nice as well. As for Akane agreeing to share the futon, I think she should agree with an extra "I trust you, but if you try anything, I'll pound you flat!". Also, it would be nice to mention *when* your story is taking place. Right after the manga? A year later? Perhaps tie in some past events to help explain the character maturation you aare going for. When Akane fixes his shirt, it should still be a poor quality job -- something that keeps his shirt together, but looks horrible! Also, I would NOT have Akane cry over getting lost, or get all clutchy because of thunder. It is very OOC, although I really did enjoy your description that Ranma had noticed her slightly tense at thunder in the past and knew it made her uneasy.

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YOU ARE ONE OF MY FAVORITE ALL TIME AUTHORS!
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AWESOME CHAPPIE!
Realy? You're french? I am :
English
French
Irish
Scottish
German
Indian(oNe relative who married an indian...not sure what tribe though...)
I think that's it...Though my dad's side might have more since his mom doesn't know much about their ancestry...
COOL! YOU"RE FRENCH!
AWESOME CHAPPIE!
Love Celtic/Irish music! IT ROCKS ON ICE!
AND SO DOES YOUR STORY!

THIS IS GONNA BE EXTREMELY SHORT CUZ I WANA READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE@
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WHat is this rated again?
I LOVE THE STORY!

*Squeals like P-chan, though not quite pig-like. Heh. Let's just say I squealed* Such a cute first chapter! It's 1:39 AM, but I don't care! I must READ!

Very evocative, it made me feel as if I were actually there.

WAFFy, of course. I liked it.

I loved this fic and am looking forward to the epilogue. I've enjoyed all your fics so far and hope you keep writing.

Thanks for the fic it was soo good. I know why ur freinds call u a romantic, thats a good thing, If people said that to me i'd say , thank you.. It's nuttin to be ashamed of. And my best freind is a writer and lets just say i know how u can feel.. Please if it's not to much trouble E-MAIL ME toalert me on when ur gonna post the epilogue. Thanks, God Bless.

That was great! I love the dramaticness of it dont let reviews that say it was too sappy or somthing make u fell bad. Cause I loved it. Please if it woulden't be to much trouble send me an email to just alert me on when the epilogue will be posted.. Thanks E-MAIL ME, God Bless...^-^